Wow, this story is so sad. But amazing.

I love the deepness of it.

Well done :)

You know, i seriously hate how good you are at writing sad stories.

Frankly it's a unique talent I have yet to find in anyone else. There is someone else who is going to write a sad ending for a multi-chapter story, but they will never be able to compare to you.

This is really sad, but I can't help but read it.

Your really damn good at this you know.

That is so good!

I love the ending how you say: Kris wondered about many things as he meticulously picked her team apart. But her thoughts all returned to the same place- how awful it was to be a legend, how awful, and how very sad.

But I like the 'Picked her team apart bit' best

That was...fascinating. :D I'd really love to see this expanded so we can learn why Ash has become this way - it seems to be such a drastic change, and this doesn't happen without a reason. And poor Blue.

Great job!

You make it sound like being champion is a bad thing. Hail to the most powerful trainers of all; Red, Lance and Cynthia (sorry, can't remember Sapphire and rubys champ) The end made me feel scared though...

Aww.. I'd like to know what really happened too. ( Good fic.