I like it.

Hmm. Thought provoking. I like.

-RB

very nice. I loved it great job.

I absolutely adored this. Very emotional. Great smut!

Sequel?

HOT! Wonderful smut. I loved this bit..."Life as a Death Eater and spy had sent him reeling so far away from innocence, right and wrong that he no longer felt capable of defining purity from corruption, and yet, that was what he felt. Pure, as though past sins had been washed away with the hot strokes of Harry's tongue, as though the whispered promises had made him clean again."

I adored those sentences. So beautifully expressed. I'm in awe of the way you can express emotions simply and with a sense of poetry without it actually being poetic, and never cheesy or cliched. Does that even make sense? I know what I mean anyway and it's wonderful and I am jealous. Sigh.
Beautiful.