Intresting... I think I like it. It certainly made me think of Victoria differently

Wow, I really like this story! I am so interested to see what will happen! Great writing! Keep it up!

-Sarah

This is fantastic! I found it on The Twilight Awards plugboard and I'm so glad I clicked it! Honestly, this story is completely under-reviewed. It's amazing! I'm hooked! Keep up the awesome work!

Dream

Gaah! Love you! Just, love, that's all I have to say.

I liked how she found out what she was. I also liked how you introduced James and showed them as companions.

It's been so long, but i love everthing u write!

HAPPY DAY! I have been in anticipation for this story as much as Breaking Dawn, oh thank you for updating! Beautiful chapter, it's so smooth it flows with creative style. I crave another chapter lol, please update soon, goodnight.

xoxo,

Diana

Excellent, Ren, excellent! I love Victoria!

I loved this! I got so caught up in the character of young Victoria, I forgot what a rotten vamp-adult she turned out to be. Lovely, and very original!

I really like this story so far. I can't wait for your next update. Can't wait and hurry. I'm dying for more. :)

I am very happy that I have read this far. I hope that you continue. After reading this,one truely feels for Victoria. SHe had such a hard life. I hope she is able to find resolve to her first problem before she is gone.

Ok, you're a really good writer! Please update soon!

This is very good. I hope to read more to this. It is an interesting concept you have presented and I would love to know more.

George

Loved it! I can't wait to find out what will happen in the next chapter!

Gah! This is amazing Ren! Just as amazing as the first ten chapters! I love love love it. You have no idea how much I love your writing. And I posted Chapter 2 of my fan-fic online. Check it out sometime.