 Razor Grins 2009-08-16 . chapter 1Very well written. I liked the use of italics to stress syllables. I could hear a little Joker in my head speaking... haha.
"Maybe she was a coward. Maybe she preferred the pain to trying to save herself, and making him even angrier in the process.
Or maybe, deep down, she liked it."
Liked these lines particularly.
Carry on with your awesomeness. ;D |