i love this story!

I decided to check some of your stories out since you seemed to be a very experienced author. I will admit I'm quite envious of your writing style. I'm still need to work on mine, especially since I went on a big, long writer's block and only started getting out of it recently.

This fanfic is excellant. Everyone is kept in character and the way that it's written didn't bore me. I haven't really been bothering with the FFVII fandom for a while because of the the lack of decent fanfics and some issues in my life. I'm glad someone finally wrote one I could enjoy after neglecting the fandom for so long.

The best thing is that it's an innocent friendship fic instead of a romance one. I will admit I don't mind most pairings, but I like reading a good friendship one once in a while. One of the very reasons I avoid most fanfics with Zack and Sephiroth is because it's hard to find one without yaoi in it. Don't get me in case you actually like yaoi. I've learned to tolerate it, but I'm not really a big fan of it.

I'll try to check out some of your other fanfics.

That was so sweet! Wonderfully written, everyone was so in character, and I loved the ending most of all. Your portrayal of Seph and Zack is so realistic and refreshing. Please keep up the good work!

That was beautiful! *wipes tear from eye* I love your Sephiroth! The way you write him...hes so caring towards Zack. Aw, poor Zack, hes sick and the shower curtain decides to attack him. I lol at Lizard = Lazard. Awesome job! Loved it!

I really love the Seph in this story! So reassuring and tender :)
And I think Zack don't often get sick, too.But a sick/quite is so cute **hugs.**
Thank you for your story XD

Aw... Sephy playing nurse... liked it a lot!!

aw... good job! Poor Zack! Luckily, Seph's around to rescue him! ~Ila

I read this right after I climbed out of the shower. I'd been standing on the drain, and it started filling up...

Anyway, I love this story. It's so sweet. I'd love to see Seph carrying Zcac. I also cracked up at the Lizard/Lazard thign...

I never thought Sephiroth can get sick! Well, maybe when he was young anyway... But when he grows up, it's impossible to get sick... Ain't it?

Lots of people around here are getting sick and I want no part in it! XD *hides under desk.*

This is really cute! Short and sweet. I love the idea that it's always your family that'll take care of you when you're sick, and Zack and Seph and they're strange sort of surrogate brotherhood. ^^

**snickers @ Lizard.** I wonder how often Lazard gets people messing up his name? Especially those who never knew him. XD And what with all the paperwork in Shinra, I wonder how often those typos creep in... LOL.

Ugh, poor Zack! What an awful way to feel, being sick like that. **hugs.**

But this was so cute! ^^ I love how Seph was so concerned about him. And aw, I totally love the sentence about how Seph did know what it was like to be sick at home. And how he wanted to make Zack feel like he was home, too. ^^

Aww! More, please! ^^ Seph can be such a sweetheart.

LOL at Zack typing "Lizard" (and him catching it!).

But poor Zack being under the weather. Urgh, that's not a nice place to fall...

But the friendship/surrogate family cuteness is so adorable! Yay for Seph helping him, making him feel at home, and fathering him! I liked the addition that Zack never used the thermometer yet.

I adored the ending line!

aw this is adorable. I love the way you show them.. its so sweet!

Aw, I always love your work on Seph and Zack. It just make me feel so happy seeing them working and taking care of each other in a friendly way.