 Jasper-replaces-edward 2010-01-07 . chapter 12I loved this version from EPOV, you get him just right.
Wonderful.
julie
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 phoenix fan1 2009-12-29 . chapter 12Great last chapter. The thing that Breaking Dawn was missing was the bonding between Edward and Renesmee and I loved your version of it! |
 love bite 2009-12-19 . chapter 12What a sweet moment to capture between Daddy and daughter. Thanks for sharing! |
 puppylove216 2009-12-19 . chapter 12Wow great job I just finshed reading this and it's wonderful I think you should do another Edward POV your really good at it I love how you add the background stories of Edward and Bella together and Edward's life before being a vampire,amazing writing style! |
 Neumzie 2009-12-19 . chapter 3BEAUTIFUL! |
 EmmaRobison 2009-12-19 . chapter 12I think this is one of the best Edward priv stories that I have read!
It takes the emotion of BD to a whole new level, keep up the great writing!
I am going to go check for your other stories!! |
 blondie AKA robin 2009-12-18 . chapter 12Thank you so much for the dedication! What a lovely ending - and congratulations! Completing such a huge project is such an accomplishment.
Lovely chapter, my friend!
<3
blondie |
 Krystle Dawn 2009-12-18 . chapter 12A beautiful ending - I absolutely loved it. Thanks for your amazing story - Krystle Dawn |
 MJCullen02 2009-12-18 . chapter 12Thank you for updating :)
I really liked how the father - daughter time went!!
Its One of the best stories i've read. You did a great job ;) |
 PenName76 2009-12-18 . chapter 12I've really enjoyed this story and I think you've done a wonderful job. Happy Holidays! |
 define-serenity 2009-12-18 . chapter 1the amounts of 'awws' and 'squees' that accompanied my reading of this was insane. LOVE this! |
 xEmmaxSophiex 2009-12-18 . chapter 12aww!
it's so cute!
love it!
thanks
Em
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 Sky-Angel14 2009-12-18 . chapter 12AW... |
 ThexInvisiblexGirl 2009-12-18 . chapter 12i still dislike Breaking Dawn in general, and Renesmee as a name in particular is still kind of ridiculous to me, but i really like the way you wrapped things up here. despite the grimness of the moment in Breaking Dawn, there's a hopeful/optimistic note to the final scene here, and it's a nice contrast i think.
thanks for the dedication too, and for recommending Left Behind. i had a great time giving you insight - especially our Renesmee's visions in the womb epiphany!
Merry Christmas, love x |
 bouncy 72 2009-12-18 . chapter 12So sad it's finished. That was SO beautiful. Edwards pain when he was worrying about her..to be loved with that kind of obsession.
I loved hearing this from EPOV, I don't know, it seems more special like that. Thank you for the wonderful story & the recs! Have a lovely Christmas & New Year too. :) |