let me just say right of the bat that i just watched one of the greatest movies outside of twilight and harry potter and soul sufer(we bought a zoo) so i am sill crying about that. but this story was so good i'm crying about it too.

i'm glad that you skipped the most of the birth from his pov because that would have taken forever and probly been confusing

i wish that stephanie had not done that part from jacobs pov because he was just moping the whole time this was so cute that i would love to see it from bella's perspective it would probly be similar

it was so cute when edward first met renesmee but i wanted to punch jacob a lot

one of the only things that i didn't realy like much from one of the other chapters is when edward didn't like the boy name.i think that he would have been sooo worried about bella that he wouldn't have cared if she named it james, especially since he sill owed jacob for diching the wolf pack and helping his family. but that is just my opinion of course!

i can't wait to read some of your other stories

you are a very good author don't let anyone tell you otherwise!:)

(if i didn't make it clear i highly recommend the movie "we bought a zoo" it was and awesome movie)

sometimes i realy hate rosalie

i originaly felt sorry for her. ya no, she was raped by her soon-to-be-husband (sorry i can't find the spelling for the "f" word for soon-to-be-husband i tried to spell it but ended up spelling fence) and can't have kids but that is no reason to be so mean to edward and jacob.i never understood how jacob could be so mean to her but now i do i probly would have ripped her head if i was IS SO MEAN!:P

PS this is the second time i have reviewed this chapter

i almost cried when i read this from jacobs pov

i did cry when i saw the movie

and i just cried when i read this

it was so good. i always wondered what the baby would say if stephanie finished midnight you wrote was very close to what i think it would be. don't judge me, but i realy liked it when they kissed. i wish that they kissed more in this part of the book. they probly did jacob just couldn't take it so he left. i guess we will find out when midnight sun comes out. any way the kiss was just perfect:ackward,sweet,and very adorable

you have inspired me to watch this part of the movie for about the 50th time

keep up the good writing!:)

sometimes i realy want to slap rosalie

I LOVED IT! I get the whole blue eyes thing... SO.. I've got Princess by Vera... I can soo imagine it!

-XxIHeartTwilightxX

Nessie's eyes are brown. But... I'm loving it!

LOVVEEEEEEEEE it!

realized I had finished reading but didn't review. I really disagree with the idea of Edward Jacob. Bella is not that insensitive to Edward's feelings about Jacob. You are correct in how Edward would feel about that name and her insistence on it. She would not do that. All in all a good retelling of this part of the story from Edward's point of view. I'll check out your other stories.

What is it with Edward Jacob EJ? seems Edward Junior is the better full name.

One thing I think most people forget when writing Edward pov of BD is that he knows what Esme and Rosalie went through with abusive sexual encounters. Just seeing bruises on Bella that he caused would likely being those memories up, knowingly or not. He would equate those bruise to abuse and being a monster in that way. He overreacts and fails to consider that bruises usually look a lot worse than they feel - likely especially true with Bella. He fails to listen and hear and understand and believe Bella while locked in his erroneous thoughts. This is well written and I will continue to read, but since it has been awhile since update not likely until end.

I really enjoyed your story. Great to hear Edward's point of view! :)

I just started reading this story, and I know I have more to go but I just had to review this chapter. Thank you for indulging, the wedding from Edward's POV was a must! Oh it was beautiful! *Sigh*

loved your story ! I looked for Metamorphosis by livesamongthestars and couldnt find it. Do you have a link ?

I love Edwarda POV ! Ive added this story to our "underappreciated,yet awesome twilight fics" and maybe more people will see what a great story this is !

what does this mean ? "I should have"