I loved this version from EPOV, you get him just right.

Wonderful.

julie
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Great last chapter. The thing that Breaking Dawn was missing was the bonding between Edward and Renesmee and I loved your version of it!

What a sweet moment to capture between Daddy and daughter. Thanks for sharing!

Wow great job I just finshed reading this and it's wonderful I think you should do another Edward POV your really good at it I love how you add the background stories of Edward and Bella together and Edward's life before being a vampire,amazing writing style!

BEAUTIFUL!

I think this is one of the best Edward priv stories that I have read!
It takes the emotion of BD to a whole new level, keep up the great writing!
I am going to go check for your other stories!!

Thank you so much for the dedication! What a lovely ending - and congratulations! Completing such a huge project is such an accomplishment.

Lovely chapter, my friend!

<3
blondie

A beautiful ending - I absolutely loved it. Thanks for your amazing story - Krystle Dawn

Thank you for updating :)
I really liked how the father - daughter time went!!
Its One of the best stories i've read. You did a great job ;)

I've really enjoyed this story and I think you've done a wonderful job. Happy Holidays!

the amounts of 'awws' and 'squees' that accompanied my reading of this was insane. LOVE this!

aww!

it's so cute!

love it!

thanks

Em

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AW...

i still dislike Breaking Dawn in general, and Renesmee as a name in particular is still kind of ridiculous to me, but i really like the way you wrapped things up here. despite the grimness of the moment in Breaking Dawn, there's a hopeful/optimistic note to the final scene here, and it's a nice contrast i think.

thanks for the dedication too, and for recommending Left Behind. i had a great time giving you insight - especially our Renesmee's visions in the womb epiphany!

Merry Christmas, love x

So sad it's finished. That was SO beautiful. Edwards pain when he was worrying about her..to be loved with that kind of obsession.
I loved hearing this from EPOV, I don't know, it seems more special like that. Thank you for the wonderful story & the recs! Have a lovely Christmas & New Year too. :)