very original. 10

more?!?!!? do it...lol but rely do it!

Well, it's about time that I reviewed one of your fics...Don't know why I didn't review sooner, but...

Anyway, this was quite well-written. You brought out Jazz and Yoyo really well here and I like the use of detail throughout all of your fics, actually (which reminds me...I SHOULD get to reviewing those as well. Man, I'm so lazy lately...).

Yeah, I noticed the formatting issue while I was reading, but you already mentioned knowing about it, so I can let that slide. ;) I know writers usually like CC since it helps them improve, but I really couldn't find anything to point out, so I must apologize if this seems like a short review. Your story was really good, though, so you won't hear any complaints from me. I hope to see more of it in time if you're able to post the rest of it up.

I absolutely loved reading this, as I do with all your fanfictions, and I liked how you gave a totally different view on Jazz to what most fanfics on here do.