Oh! Please do update again soon! I'm a huge fan of the Burton/Depp collaborations, and I've yet to find an ES story i like, till I read yours! Keep it up! This is one of my favorites!

wow long. I like!
So now that i finally am all cozy in my Phantom Cloak (Cheeky grin) and PJ's I got to read this. . . even though i have 11 projects from drama at the momento. Eep. yeah 11. one course. Scary!
So lemmy get to the point before i ramble off my rocker! Yeep awsome chapter :) you know i love your story tiz awsome as a pawsome sleepin in a wossely (don't ask) chair on a sunday afternoon! *and thats pretty amazing to see that happen!*
What joys now i think im literally going insane. You know what i think. I think doc's are nuts. My dr. gave me these pills (cause i had this spider bite and blablaableep) and failed to mention the fact that they cause EXTREAM anxiety, WHELL being that i have 11 projects from one course, and tests and other projects from other course - pluss i'm trying to read Hannibal Rising (cause i love it) but i can't find the time and OMG i have a play to direct, an enviornmental group to deal with and a drama councils demands and of course the joy of horsebackriding to squeez in there...
*BREATH*
well... lets just say i had a extream anxiety attack. . . then proceeded to believe i was insane and took a fansy to tearing up a lot. (THATS DOC!) then my mom thought i was acting not like myself, naww really?, and read the side effects. BAM i stopped takin them and i'm... well as back to normal as anyone can be in ones situation. :)
Why i had to say all that... well somehow i thought it was of segnificance.
Anyways. So now that i'm outa the 'nuts' woods and back in 'normal land' i got to push aside some of my killer projects and read your story. Once again a saviour from the boring. :) yay!
right. um... now i'm gunna have to leave another review. Wonder if i can find something else to rant about... prolly can... knowing me. HAHA!
Alright off to the next chapter :D keep up the FANTABULAS work (i only used that word cause i don't think i've ever used it before... SO NOW I DID. HAH!)
:D
-Liz

wow. Jason just seems more and more like a stalker as i read on. haha

D'aw! I love this little story! Keep up the good work!

You write Edward very well.

I've been lurking around for a while now, and I supposed I should probably leave you a review, since you seem to like them so much!

Your story is actually very fun to read; hearing about Roses's interactions with her friends and the conflicts they get into is fairly interesting and drawing. I didn't think it was at first, but the relationship "web" you're weaving is quite intricate and balanced, and I applaud you for it.

But most of all, I applaud you for Edward's character. You write him very well. Everything he says is perfectly placed; I can imagine him acting and saying all of the things he has thus far, and I love it. As cheesy as it sounds, I get excited every time Rose goes to visit him, because I love the timid innocence about him that you employ so well.

The only constructive thing I have to say is edit. There are some mistakes, such as missing punctuation before speech--just little things. Of course, it isn't like we're making profits off of this or impressing ivy-league-bread-winning-gramar-nazis, so it's not as imperative as your story, which is quite well rounded as of yet. I will keep reading, and I'll periodically drop you a much desired review when I have something not so redundant to say. :) overall: fun, cute story that I like to read instead of my text books (haha).

Ah! They are just too cute XD.
Oh yeah, I drew an awesome Edward Scissorhands today, which made me think of this story (since I haven't checked my email in a long time), I was thinking, 'Hey! I wonder if she updated her story!' So here I am ready your story.
Good times had by all :)
Anyways, I love it! Continue!

HANNAH

Aww, this chapter made me really sad- I felt terrible for Edward when he thought Rose was dead:(
I hope she finally tells him her feelings soon- Edward to deserves love:)
Please update ASAP!

I demand you come back and update this instantly! ...Okay wait don't update now since ur ending the story! Ugh I gonna try and not think about that and just review...its hard! Anyways this chapter was so cute. I applaud her for getting out of bed and going to go see edward I don't think I would have made it passed the door step. People on block would have thought someone had strangled me on the sidewalks. This chapter made u feel so bad for edward. Like when it said he waited 3 days and how he counted the days because it made time go by faster. I loved how you did the flashbacks of him remembering the inventor and how he never woke up I can only imagine what edward was feeling because I started to squeal when she fell a sleep. This only makes you think if her being there is benefitical for edward if he going thru so much truama! Eh I wouldn't be able to stay away if I was rose. Can't wait(but I will) for the next chappie!

oh poor edward! he mustve been so worried! great chapter! update soon!

Wow.
Probably the scariest chapter so far. It was nice, though.
I like how you added the element of fantasy with "It's still hot, but not tongue-burning" hot chocolate. I've never seen it. xD
The "flashback"-ish things were nice. Keep writing, I'm sorry to see the story end EVER. <3

SICK SICK SICK SICK! ^^ *laughs* erm, I loved this chapter just because Edward was all cute n' adorable and everything :) Keep it up =^D

Oh my God!Such a wonderful chapter.Well done.
Please update again soon.:)

Meh!

Can this chapter, story, you, everything, get anymore WONDERFUL??!

Being close to winter and all, I'm sure lots of people are having a cold or the like by now (like I do), but the thought of snuggling up next to Edward is too wonderful to resist:) Even if it means going outside.
Especially if there's hot chocolate available;p

No Jason at all!:D

How do you describe Edward so well; are you related to Tim Burton, or do you just have his private number?

In all cases, HAIL TO THE GODDESS OF THE WRITERS! *dances around in a flowing white gown and throw rose petals and pearls around*

aw how cute. she went even though she was sick. now thats a true friend, i can't wait for the next chapter

awe, poor Rose being sick

Raine