these are great, keep it up

I loved this chapter of scenes! ^_^ it had Tonks (THANK YOU UMI!) and you even sneeked in some fun Luna and Harry moments, which I know you loved doing the most.

It really was fun though, to not only see Tonks, but see her and Charlie together since they did go to school at the same time. And it's fun to think they knew each other too.

Looking forward to the next set of scenes girl.

Cute and funny. (Although the maruaders one passed me by.) Keep updating

I love the one with the rubber ducks, lol
and the one with peeves, it would certainly be very uncharasteristic of him to do that, or maybe that would have been the point, (lower their defenses, lol)
LOL- and the harry loving bludger :P
and moody's advice ;P
and wormtail's glittering gargoyles, LOL
k, those are my faves, lol
great job on the one shot- loved it :)

awesome set of stories, keep it up!

Haha, funny...

update soon
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Cute. Can't wait until you update.

:)

these are great, can't wait to see more.

great stories, can't wait for more!

Okay, so you told me to read this, and so I have. And now I know why you are not updating the other stories as quickly, you are distracted. I'm so mad at you right now!
Just kidding! ^.^ you know I loved it girl. I can't believe you actually began writing Harry Potter fanfiction again, I love it, but still it's crazy.

As for these scenes - LOVE the spider stuff, but the kickers are the short tidpits: a little Harry who just wants to be read a bedtime story, just too cute! And Luna wanting a skrewt is just too funny and worse, it really is something she might have done. You need to write more with her and Ginny as they start at Hogwarts, I'm sure they've got some interesting stories.
Oh, and I will NEVER be able to read or watch the scene in chamber of secrets without that scene with the broom closet and Malfoy running through my head. Never! Gir!

As always, you have WAY to much fun with the marauder characters. Remember the scene you wrote where they all had their first flying lesson? You should so pull that huge ass binder out and find it and just add it to all this insanity- I think everyone would love it and I would die of laughter all over again.

Let's see, what else, okay - explain to me how, or rather why you came up with the boa and bludger scenes, not that they aren't enjoyable, but still - why? And as I write that I can already hear you say "why not?", so ha ha on me I guess.

The spider scene is slightly out of control, and that's saying something coming from me to you. The Weasley twin stuff is just brilliant and I loved how they talked with Moody and then realized it is their fault to begin with since they tramatized poor Ron as a child. I swear, wouldn't you hate to be the Weasley family therapist?! I would rather kiss a skrewt I think.

Well you know I'm going to ask for more Marauder stuff, but I guess I'll throw some other ideas out there too.
How about a Tonks scene, or at least one where she is in it. ^_^ pretty, pretty please.
some prompt questions, because I know you hate them and love them: What does the Sorting Hat think about during that whole year? What is a typical day at the Malfoy's like? Is Norbert doing okay?(I worry about him) Cedric told Harry to bring the egg to the prefect bathroom, presumably for privacy right. But why did he bring the egg there in the first place?, how did he learn to listen to it under the water? And finally, Why is it certain people in pictures are able to talk- but Harry can't converse with his parent's pictures?

Funny and crazy. Keep updating.

Very interesting sequences, I must say.

Would be fun to see some Crazy!Harry sequences. Who wouldn't go insane by watching spiders crawl round and round in a cupboard all day?

Keep going!

Excellent chapter once again. I loved the exotic passwords the Fat Lady is coming up with.

I just thought of something when I was rereading the Gryffindor revenge scene.
"Now string them together, and answer me this,
"Which creature would you be unwilling to kiss?"
hehe. I love it when the story lines we come up with could actually have happened. Crouch and Bagman and Winky and Rita Skeeter had issues during that time as well.

Did you catch the line I was trying to tell you about before I had to go to my class? It was "He had been expecting Fred to be a little more polite and less obvious about why they had come." That was an interesting bit of unconscious foreshadowing.

Oh, and little nitpicky thing... "severs" vs. "serves". lol. I know you and the only reason I'm commenting on that is that it changes the meaning slightly. Well, unless you meant for Peter to pronounce it wrong. lol. That would actually be a rather funny quirk, you know. Pronouncing random words wrong.

Could you imagine a Latin pronunciation lesson with some of those first-years? lol. Cenis. hehe. See what you're getting me to do?!

You'll find that I like long. This had me bouncing up and down in my seat, trying to contain my laughter so I didn't look like a complete idiot. (cocks head to side) It didn't work so well. lol. Thankfully the room was deserted most of the time. I've already ruined my reputation though, so I'm not sure why I try anymore. I'm so glad you're enjoying this as much as I am. I can't wait for more!

yes, it was a VERY long chapter, but that was GREAT! I loved it!
but what the newt is that password fred and george shout? I mean, HOW do you even begin to pronounce that?
I loved all the scenes, the poker with the professors was brillant, poor Snape- he can never get a break. lol.
"Oh for the love of Lockheart Severus, don't just stand there like some kind of depressed robot, sit down and join us."
I still can't believe you actually said that! I mean, one making fun of Snape and the two, making fun of the fact that is was the actor who potrayed Snape who voiced the depressed robot in hitchhikers guide across the galaxy - it's just too much!

"She left breakfast in a hurry muttering something about spewing or whatever." Ron replied scratching his nose.

"Was she feeling sick or something?" Harry asked. Ron just shrugged.

"Don't know, and I'd prefer not to ask her about it till after dinner."

"Right."
ANYTHING that makes fun of S.P.E.W makes me smile.

"Yeah, we've got to find time to swap stories more," Fred said to George, who nodded in agreement.
I Agree! I would have loved to see/hear more about their exploits in the books.

"So we, as his older brothers, can't just bloody well look the other way when someone else picks on our little brother."

"He is the only one we've got, have to look out for him."
That whole conversation made me die of laughter, I still can't believe how well you pulled that one off.

And I could spend hours on the maurader scene, but I won't - I'll just wait to tell you when I see you this weekend.

Ok, weird. It put my last review down as a nameless anon. Oh well. That was me. Odd. Anyway, since I get to review again, I probably ought to list some more lines that I loved in this chapter. These all made me laugh so hard. The dialogue you put in this seems very real and true to character as much as possible.
"What a rush"
"'Don't start that again.' 'Shut it Wormtail.'"
"'Nothing.' 'Honestly'"
"We don't give the big guy as much respect as he deserves apparently."
"W--WH--WHAT!? -- Do -- You -- Mean -- We've -- Shared -- the Map -- With a -- Second -- Generation Marauder!"
lol. That one was really funny.
"Oh, right you two don't know."
"Ferrets eh? ... We can do loads with that one."
"Ron's rat wanted to kill you."
"'Someone's feeling overconfident' 'Nope. Just like seeing you sweat from the pressure, Moony'"
"Nevermind. I don't need to know."
There. Another review. Hopefully this time it keeps me logged in.
Matelia