I enjoy that this is "after" the glory age, for it must come to an end.

I love the idea of the statue, and that Gol D. Roger is now more fantasised but Luffy is and his nakama are still remembered as "demons".

I'm not sure I really get the hurrican references but that's not important. Thanks for sharing.

This is one wonderful fanfiction :) You managed to pack the whole of the pirate king's greatness in so few words, without even letting him appear himself... Also, I just love those merchants, trying to sell you whatever they claim to be a authentic something...
Really an awesome story ^^

nice short piece. i liked how you were able to evoke certain feelings: in the first half awe, admiration, and amusement, in the second half encouragement, friendship, and optimism, and overall a feeling of nostalgia.

Simply beautiful and well written,,i also love the ending...very nice...
Hope to see more from you soon

This was great. I love the imagery you bring about. ^_^

Amazing story. Loved it both times I read it. I like how it says that he was a terrifing man when he is the most happy go lucky person in the world of one piece.

This was absolutely gorgeous, kinda sad how people only remember Luffy for what he'd done instead of who he was.

This is magical. Its so great to out in words. It shiens a new light on most fanfiction that people post up these days. Great job.

wow that was absolutly beautiful ty so much for writing this

OH MY GOODNESS!
That was deep. I will never read another story like yours that will be better. The ending was amazing! Actually it all was!

Sphnx

*Nod* Very nice. Its an interesting story.