A lovely little glimpse of the might have been. I always wanted to see a second Labyrinth.

This is quite nice for a small piece. I hope you write more for Labyrinth! -Clare

Ooh i really like this! It's a great idea and very well written! Adore the line: "But you have my heart." ..*shudders* for more reasons than one. Will you continue it? *Hint* I loved it..

Very nice! :) Hoping for more soon! :D

Update soon! :D

I have enjoyed reading this story today. thank you for sharing. Keep smiling. :-) More please.

I like it so far. More please.