man, i remember that episode. i was sobbing with Heaven and this was pretty much how i would've seen her point of view :) great job!

Please continue! Please please please please please please please please continue!

interesting :P i've only seen 4 of the 6 episodes so far. The books it's based off of were amazing though. i'm not sure if she actually cut jake's rope, but if she did i may have to cry

i was so upset when she cut his rope! ugh. but it all worked out. :)

loved this!

It's good keep going

I loved this series! Jake and Heaven are my new favorite couple! I really loved this. It showed what was going through her head, things you knew she was thinking but weren't said out loud on the show!

OMG! I cannot believe you wrote a Samurai Girl fic! I haven't been on fanfiction for days, but I LOVE SAMURAI GIRL. I'm reading the books in the series by Carrie Asai at the moment, the characters are different and there are some minor changes in comparison; but it's basically the same, story-wise. Good job! :D

Well you used your lunch break wisely :) I don't know the show, but I love your writing, and I really like second person narratives too! And this was so sad... I could feel how horrible the decision was to make, how could you choose? The ending was really moving as he falls through the clouds and then the knowledge that there has to be a next and what to do now. you write drama and tragedy very well.