Aww! I'm glad you got Darry to realise this, even if he never really did in the book! Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Ah, I love Darry stories. I always try to imagine how I'd feel if I woke up one day with two dead parents and younger siblings to care for. He's done an amazing job, but it's nice to see the evolution from kid to bill payer. I liked the little details of the story like the viewing of the bodies and Dallas being included in the alcohol discussion. Great job!

Darry was briliant. You managed to draw him as the adult he was forced into being and the kid he still was - which is a hard thing to do.

Two-Bit was great, I loved how he tried to sweet talk Darry into playing.

The 'lesson', I guess you could call it, was also incredibly powerful.

Ahh, growing up is hard to do especially for Darry, I liked how Two-Bit was trying to woo Darry with his charm.