Another awesome chapter! I like how you show the characters, very well done. Can't wait for the next update!

AWESOME STORY! Most Star Ocean fics suck, but you got a great one here!

Okay, first of all, this is a review for Chapter 1 through Chapter 7...

I must say, this is nicely done! I am interested to see how this continues!
A few spots from have some slight grammar issues... Although grammar isn't exactly my strong suit so I might be wrong on the whole grammar issue thing.
Now even if I don't review often know that I WILL continue reading, and that when I CAN review I will.
As for now, I must go, so let me end the review by saying you have talent, so don't stop writing!

I really love this story, except for a few things, you keep to most of the story as to what we have seen in the games...

And also, I really do have to ask, if you are going to put Star Ocean 4 in the story. I think it could probably fit into this, and some of the elements of SO4 could fit into the story as well...

Nice job. A little foreshadowing and a lot more mysteries . . . Kinda curious hwy you decided to put Leon in this part of the story.

Good job, though not much happened this chapter. Still confused s hell about the dream, though . . . .

Good job. Is Jie one of the Ten Wise Men, or is he an original villain . . . . thing . . .

Also, was the last part Rena's view leading up to the meeting with Claude or was it after the discussion that Westa had with Regis?

Good job. How's Claude going to deal with the issue of having to give nigh near everyone he meets and translator . . . he'd have to run out of them eventually . . .

Defiantly a different way to begin the second Stat Ocean game, good, but different. How did Claude's dad know that something of this nature was going to happen to his son, though?

I've been following this story for a while, just too lazy to review. It's a pretty good story, so far. It ties in the elements and idea that the different games present (i.e. the Executioner outside the Calnus). I'm rather curious why you say that the incident on Roak was the starting point for the whole Creator fiasco, but I'm sure you say eventually.

I swear, people must be scared of huge word counts or something, since one of my fics has the same problem. But yeah, this is pretty good so far . . . all the extra details and alterations fit very well.

I can't wait to see how you treat the other two games, particularly SO3.

Actully, I like this story...
It's very good, and I always wanted to see a story where the 3 SO games would combine or something?

Also, will all the characters from each game, be included, like insted of picking 8 of them to go on with the story, will all of them participate?

And will Welch be in it? (sorry, im a big Welch fan lol)

And just incase as well, will you includ Star Ocean 4 in this story as well?

Im just wondering about that?