Great job! I absolutely loved it; you did a great job entwining your story with

Meyers'.

I liked it!

beautifully written

Please say that you will continue this! It was awesome. I loved it!

I enjoyed your story! Nice work on the conflicting feelings.

Nice little one-shot.

I just love Emmett. He's such a cute idiot.

Great story!

awesome.

D

aw

really nice!

*sigh* sometimes i wish ms. meyers had written the Twilight series in a mix between Bella and Edward's perspective... i feel like we are missing so much when only knowing Bella's perspective because since she was human throughout most of the series, she didn't get to see what everyone else was doing around her in order to protect her...Edward did...great chapter...

very cute! A great balance of sweetness and a little edgy.

This is lovely. Your Edward is very captivating - I very much enjoyed being in his head throughout the story. Count me among your devoted readers. :)

very enjoyable... nice job!

i like your edward pov

your really good at it

very nice :) I like it better than some of Midnight Sun ;)