Also, very great. I love your writing style. Detailed, but not so much that it's rambles. Time to read the last one!

This one is very good too. I really didn't like this part of Breaking Dawn, because Edward wasn't behaving like a 'father', I don't know if you undertand me. But your one-shots change that, that's why I like them.
Now I'm going to read the third one.

aww that was so sweet.
on to the next one!

At least it was a valid excuse to get out of bed—my only valid excuse, according to Edward. -- such an Edward thing to say ;)

I stopped breathing. . .momentarily.
He rolled his eyes, “Don’t start that again.”

“Did I mentioned talented? She can laugh and cry at the same time.” so cute... I love how you keep Edward's humor :)

“I love you already,” he breathed and tenderly kissed our baby though my skin. The tears were streaming down my cheeks as he continued, “But I love Mommy, too. And, I don’t want anything to happen to her.” that was so sad but beautifully summed up how Edward felt...

that was so beautiful... and yes Bella... you are capable of hurting Edward... multiple times. thank you for finally realizing it

Once again, excellent! I loved how Edward is now taking charge instead of Rosalie. Can't wait to read the third part. Thanks again for sharing your talent.

Totally awesome! Great job! Edward's PoV would be cool too. ;)

~Ness