Change of scene? I'm hoping this was a sort of role playing and not their first time. If it was I'm a little disappointed that they were not careful given that neither knew the other and especially for Bella who was basically fucking a lead singer in a band and had no idea how often he took women to his camper. But like I said ... I'm hoping this was a role playing to spice up an already existing relationship.

Very hot, I liked it!

Wow! Would love to see this continue as a real story!

A great smutty story without the (I agree) awkward and unrealistic declarations of undying love and eternal bliss. It was great and I look forward to more one-shots like this, I hope.

one word: hott.

well. that was interesting

I applaud you.

Brava. (:

WOW! I just found this on my way to pm you about chapter 20 of "Good Bella, Bad Bella". I've forgotten what I was going to say now.*scratches head puzzled*

Superb one shot. I missed it during the 'Sexy Edward Contest'. How the Hell did that happen?

damn

wow! you have a seriously awesome talent! your emotions, the way you descrobe things is just so real. it's incredible! keep up the awesome work! and i love sexy rocker edward! so hot! btw, are you turning this into a story?

that rocked!

Hott! With 2 T's

to quote your story, "amazing is an understatement."

great job!

xoxo

aww the last line is so cute!

Wow...that was hot. Keep up the great work!