Must... stop... laughing...

Also I might continue this but never post it. Dahaha.

hahaha this is so funny! I never imagined those two together!! Too bad its only a one-shot. You did a very good job! Excellent work! It made me laugh lots!

heh...cabbage...

are there more chapters? I wanna read them!

It was hiliarious, and I was hoping to see some HirokixMisaki. But if you're not going to continue the series, I suggest you state it in the summary, so those looking for the undone pairings wont be disappointed.

THIS WAS HILARIOUS is all i can say. Shinobu is such a cabbage-hugger...

LOL. Cabbage? The threesome thing with a cabbage is highly disturbing >< HIroki and his evil dictionaries of DOOM rules! Haha KEEP THE CRACK COMING!

This is funny! even though it's kind of filled with stuff that me and some of my friends and sister would say, no offense.
Hope you would update soon!

LOL! omg you killed me xD i love it!! xD please update soon! =D xD
take care~ lots of junjou-love xD

Lol. Loved the way how the cabbage 'fit' in. Hope you update soon! Go Hiroki~!

I LOVE IT!! Haha. Im telling all my friends about this! This was insanely hilarious. I love your writing MizuTenshi-chii! ^-^

Peace, Love, and Cabbage.

Wow...o.o That was the most trippy crack that I ever did see. Hiroki would kill if that sort of thing ever came out. Overall I was amused by this and want to see more chapters filled with randomness. And Takahiro? The forever-straight man? That will be fun. :D

AHAHAH(etc. etc.)
I kept laughing during their whole bicker~
Iono why, but I find it extremely funny the two are bickering through... cabbage of all things... And also addiction to cabbage was a really unique idea, so damn funny!

Oh man, I laughed so hard my throat hurts. This is awesomely funny. ^_^ You did a good job with the crack. The cabbages and Shinobu were just perfect, as were all of Hiro's reactions, no matter how ridiculous. You got them spot on! Hope to see the next installment soon!
~Soofi

OMG! I was laughing so much! I love this story! Damn right Hiroki shouldn't need to share the love with the cabbage!

OMG!! how can you write somethig this hilarious!
Is so funny! I laughed all the cabbage scene!
congrats and thak U!! you really made my day!!
(goes and checks all your fics >.>)