Not bad, not bad at all. Actually, quite good. You kept me interested the whole time and gave some decent attention to detail, such as the frozen gun, Chris' daily bath quote, etc. Thanks for the good read!
A splendid work. I am ever a loyal fan of Jill Valentine but it's not only that. Your story is well-written, fast pacing and very enjoyable to read. The mood is perfect. The S.T.A.R.S. face not only a paranoid killer but the traps of nature as well. The appearances of the not-so-popular S.T.A.R.S. (like Marini and Frost) were very good too.
Stories about Jill and her teammates before the mansion incident are always interesting. Keep up the good work!
Well, I'm up and checking all of your work, just like (I think) I said; if I didn't, well, I'm saying it now. I've started with this one and now I'm over to "Ab initio" to continue with the others and to re-read "Ab esse ad posse" (Really, I love how you write the titles in Latin x3)
Anyway, this was another story full of awesomeness, suspense, cliffhangers... man, I read it without a break! It was amazing, and it was nice to see a small take on the STARS before the Mansion incident. I might focus on that some time in the future; for now, I'm on something else xD
0.0 OMG! Wow, this was an awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome story! I knew I was doing the right thing when I favorited you, lol! Its good to see that there are good STARS stories out there befroe the Mansion Incident. I like to see how Wesker worked with everyone while he worked with Umbrella too! Again, amazing strory! I can't wait for you next one! And don't worry! Reviews by me for your other wonderful stories are coming soon! (I'm a slow reviewer, sigh...only because of my very limited computer time!) XD
Wow. I've read alot of off topic Re stories and honestly they bore me.(By off topic I mean no zombies and blah blah blah) But this...this was just amazing. I couldn't stop reading it till I was done! I loved the plots, twist, and turns. I REALLY liked it when birkin showed up. I was like aw I know its buisness and all but its still sweet and touching. Im definatly going to go read more of your stories so expect some faves! .'
Wow, that was one heck of a story. Being hunted down by a madman in a blizzard, very suspenseful stuff. Great job!
dfds 6/17/09 . chapter 10
Dude, a STARS story! And... it may be the best one I've ever read! Whaddya know.
It's a simple idea, but I loved what you did with it. Just wishing there were more of it now. You write a fantastic STARS team. ('specially your Wesker - I've started trying to imagine him with facial expressions now, and it's pretty tough but I'm getting there, heh.)
Christ, it seems as if I haven't been on my game as of late. I didn't even realize that fan fiction had sent me a e-mail specifying that this had been updated and indeed finished! But, since I saw your review, I clicked on your name and there it said: story completed. I was immediately surprised, what is wrong with me? Hee. Moving on, this story overall was so amazing. I love the thought of Chris, Wesker and Jill getting along once upon a time. You make the relationships so real, honestly. I can't wait to read 'Sine Sole Sileo'. It sounds so perfect already. I'm in total bliss. Thank you for the amazing read.
Seems like you forced out a few of the last chapters, but regardless, this was a great read again. And slow updates are not a problem when the chapters are well written.
So keep writing stuff of this caliber and I, for one, will keep reading.
Nice explanation in the first half of chapter. Te outcome is logical and quite satisfying. The idea of Wesker with cold makes me smile, it's easy to forget that he was normal human ) And thank you very much for Birkin's appearence, that just made my day.
Will be waiting for next adventurers of the Umbrella Duo )
Back to Wesker and Jill, and I sense a fight scene coming on :D
Man, this Havel guy knows what he's doing! Fighting technique, weapons, and he came prepared. If I were to think anything at all, I wouldn't assume there's no way he's just an ordinary suspect. Either he's an ex-cop or one hell of a criminal o_0
Uh-oh, running low on ammo at a time like this, I wonder how things are going to work out...Just when I think they've got him, he's eyeballing Jill's gun very suspiciously...
Great, now Havel has them D:, but you definitely shocked me with the ending result, I completely forgot that frozen barrels explode!
Couldn't ask for a better ending than Chris running up the hill practically saying "We can go home now!"