Perfect :)
Just perfect.

That is the best part of the game, I think XD

Dude, I have so totally climbed a view point repeatedly JUST to do the Leap of Faith (esp. the Cathedral one). An Altair is far too sexy for a game character...but I'm not complaining!
:D
Good job.
necro

Well, since you asked...

Very well done. It was shorter than I expected, but it was an enjoyable read. Congrats. ;)

Hello!

You really captured the moment and the feelings associated with the leap of faith. Great job! Thanx for writing. ^_^

-IJedi

That Altaïr has a very short attention span, doesn't he? But of course, he's got places to go, people to kill. Very nice homage to a most capable badass. Your writing style is simple, yet very descriptive.

I think my favorite part of this, other than the fact that it's about Altaïr and it's well-written, is the part with him waiting a few moments in the pile of hay, listening to the sounds in town and thinking that he prefers the point of view from the tower.

Cool fic. Thanks for sharing!

Well, since I feel myself being compelled to review ^^, here is what I think: You captured his thoughts very well without being over-dramatic. Because Altair is not. He does enjoy the thrilling feeling of the rise and fall, but never loses concentration of the task at hand.
Very well done!

This is very evocative, a great description of what I've always suspected must go through his mind. Well done!