You sir are a CHAMPION. This story's got everything that's fantastic about fanfic... especially the glorious angst! XD I know you can't rush an artist (hey, writers are artists too!) but do finish this story! I'll have your babies if you do :D

...I do very much hope that you pick this story up again some day, I've been looking for a story of this sort and with this quality of craftsmanship for some time and am amazed at how bloody hard to find decent yaoi is in this fandom. Hell, decent anything. Everything is too short, not fleshed out enough. You, on the other hand, do such a very, very excellent job of bringing the characters to life. I actually read your side story about Kiril and Tam first and was amazed that it was considered mere background to this. I've been playing WoW voraciously for some time now and blood elves have long since ousted trolls as being my favorite race. You do a very good job of translating a lot of racial angst and tragedy into something that feels very intensely personal. Your characters are wonderfully alive (even when they probably wish they weren't) and your settings of places and events is excellent. A few odd missing words or letters here and there (probably a runaway spellchecker) are really the only flaw I've noticed and sheer craftsmanship greatly makes up for them.

/salute

Wonderfully written, again. I like the newness developing between Tashin and Elias. But please please please give us more of Tamarack. I can't help but love him.

I love this story so much ^^ drama, romance, plot twists, SEX! what more could any yaoi loving guy ask for? hehe
I love Tam and Kiril, they're so funny, and hot ^^
Your writing is great, your style is awesome and I never find spelling or grammar errors.
In short: I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY!! ^^
I hope you update soon!

Ja ne!

Wow, so far im realy enjoying this story :D I think some of the sex happend a little too soon so i was slightly startled by alot of the chapters xD I knew Tash wasn't all sweet, i could tell when chap 4 happend! I think Zal is more and more like the twins than he seemed in the first chapter, and i think he and Sor make a good, not-so-loving couple! boy that Tam druid sure is crazy, despite his calm wisdom. I proberably should've spread these things over diff comments but then you'd be bombarded with my comments on "omg i love this story" wich im sure youve heard too often. I realy feel Lyr should be brought back into the story (im sure you were planning that) but... with an adroable little kid!! ^-^!! Not nessesarily her child but maybe an adopted one!! A nice, cute, Belf hunter!! A girl too.. or a twin girl and boy so thats why she took them! If it were twins one should be strog in persionality only rather clumsy. Lots of confidence and all too much to say. The other should be silent and cool looking and always trying to keep the other out of trouble. Well i await the next chapter with baited breath or whatever. Hope to read more soon! you dont have to use my idea btw, just a thought. P.S. my spelling is terriable so dont blame me >.>

poor Tavian. I like his character, its because of him that I hate what is happening between his brother and his friend. He doesn't deserve that, he sacrificed everything so his brother could be happy. poor guy :(

Love the story

maye: NO! Please tell me that the twins will get back together?

Dancer: we'll keep reading either way but it's an honest qestion, will they?

Hello! I want congragulate you for wonderfull histories, this and "Light and Balance", I love the plot. It's rare a good fic of Warcraft. Realy like the couple Kiril and Tamarack, I guess I always love the antagonism of this two races together.

I started reading "Light and Balance" and liked a lot, but I finish too quickly to my taste. Well, I have to continue the history and here I'm =). I have a lot of thinks in my mind, trying to imagine your continuation to the fic, but I guess I have to wait news chapters ^^.

Well, good luck with the fic!

Ps.: Sorry for the English errors, isn't my first language.

Argh. plz to post moar.

This is an incredible story. As addicted to Wow as I am, I never thought I would find a fic with the kind of story line I like :P I love your sentance structure, you weave a sordid and enticing tale :P I fear I cannot read further because patch 3.0.3 Just finished downloading >_>' lmao, I'll return soon though.

Maye: we loved it! Tam and Kiril forever!

Dancer: we're also that you inculded us in the author's note, thanks!

Maye: till next time!

Oh my god. This story is just..Twinsest,A Romeo and Juliet complex, hidden desires, Taboo love. What more could you really ask for.

I can't wait until the next unfolding chapter of this story and I loved the three part side story.

Maye: WE loved it, only one question though... Tamarack and Kiril will get back together soon right? like next chappie?

Dancer: We love those two and we so hoping that Kiril wouldn't be stubbon...on well...love the twins!

*blush* I loved the lemon, it was well written! You have truley developed the personality of the twins. I'm curious to see how Zalmon will react.

I like this a lot so far. I've never read a warcraft story before and I just kind of stumbled across this one. And its great! Im very addicted to wow as well hehe. I hope you continue more. When ever you get around to it. Hopefully before wrath because none of us are going to get anything done around there hehe. Well happy writing and wonderful story. I love the twins so much and want to see where this is going to go.