 riceeaterxD 2009-04-20 . chapter 1lol.
poor nessie.
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 Cassio 2009-01-27 . chapter 1Hi again!
I also liked this one too!! Though if I had to pick I would stay with "When she looked at me" :). It´s so cool when you make Nessie use her power, and I also think that you got Jacob´s character right, like you know how to write about him and from his mind, as if you were him.
Keep up the great work! Thanks for this fanfic!!
Cassio |
 iheartbloom8 2009-01-22 . chapter 1Awe! that was so cute! Its funny how you made leah and jacob friends, but i still like it! |
 RedHandedJill43 2009-01-18 . chapter 1That was really cute. That was darling. |
 PrettyGirlRocks 2008-10-06 . chapter 1aww this one was really sweet! i love the idea of using leah as a jealousy tool! in the book i had wanted leah and jacob to be together until he imprinted on nessie...i thought that was simply perfect!! but i also think that if/when hopefully the next book comes out...they could definitely use leah for jealousy purposes and hopefully when they did admit there feelings they would still kiss and stuff maybe secretly...maybe he tries to hide his thoughts around edward so edward won't know...idk..lol..but i think that stephanie has enough matierial to write another story for the saga! i really hope she does and i cannot wait until the movie comes out and all the following movies come out, especially the one for breaking dawn!! i love the twilight series!! |
 Stains Of Blood 2008-09-26 . chapter 1aw no kisses for nessie. |
 Forkz94 2008-09-13 . chapter 1Funny! I never thought that Nessie would be jealous of anyone... |
 Twinsmom 2008-09-12 . chapter 1This could use a couple of more parts I think! :) |
 GwevinLoVeR 2008-09-11 . chapter 1Omj this was so cute. I love seeing a jealous Nessie. Good writing too. |
 I'm Randomspicuous 2008-09-11 . chapter 1AW! that was super cudorable (yes i know made up word..) it was really sweet |
 Peace n Luv 2008-09-11 . chapter 1aw when i read BD i didn't really like the whole nessiexjake thing but this story made me feel better about it =) |
 SquishyGirl 2008-09-11 . chapter 1Lmao! Are you ever going to actually update one of your already pre-existing stories? :P !
Ahah, don't you just hate how sometimes you get that jealous and then always jump to the wrong conclusion and get embarassed by it? Ha! Nessie is so cute. I had a brief thought to write a story of her growing up with Jacob lol but the thought was discarded.
Ok, now we focus on the update! Of ... I can't Believe your Jealous...I think ... :) |
 Twilightluv99 2008-09-11 . chapter 1Aw... That was nice. |