in a word? wow...

fantastic writing _

psychodramabeautyfish

Wow... um, yeah, you had me tense and shaky and kinda scared for Towa the WHOLE time. How emotional! I wanted to cry for him! T.T Very... interestingly written. The italics part were kinda hard to follow, as i supposed they were meant to be, I guess. But um... it was sweet, in a really bittersweet way. And in character, Yuki's descriptions were really good _ Awesomely sad piece!

O_O Wow. This was so amazing. The way you wrote it managed to convey how scattered Towa's thoughts were. It was all so disjointed, just as his thoughts were. The sentence structure itself seemed to tell a story. Then, the wonderful way you revealed the truth without ever actually saying it. It was all so amazing. And so very beautiful. You did a wonderful job on this. Absolutely amazing!

wow

Confusing at first and long. But I got into it. It's different. Good different. Not the same old lovey dovey crap.

I absolutely love this story. The words flow well and the atmosphere is just great. Just.. wow.

"...This has got to be the most humiliating day of my life - the person that I like so much… though I don't know why… is seeing
me in a state nearest to my weakest, seemingly too vulnerable beyond repair..."
those lines just struck me! I think it explain pretty well how Towa feels at that moment. How deeply he feels for Yuki and the emotional breakdown inside himself.
Another line is "you cannot call something as "the past" when it's still happening". Wow. U just have to read the fic until the end before U finally realize the whole meaning of that line. Great job! Excellent! You really have a way with words and plot. I love how U don't get all rush up to the end just to get those two together. And the way U could maintain the mood and tense atmosphere 'till the end is just amazing, considering all of those the spesific details U put in it, to explain how Towa feels.
Definitely one piece worth reading anytime! Please continue writing. I'm looking forward for your other fics!

Wow.

Just... wow. 0_0 I clicked on this absently thinking it was a GW fic and that you'd spelt Trowa wrong, I've never even heard of Kaikan Phrase before! This however, had me hooked. It was written absolutely beautifully and really packs quite a punch to the old heart strings.

You're an absolutely fantastic writer!

Wow... Towa angsty-ness... I like! This fic has inspired me... good job!

It's beautiful! A most wonderful piece. Another masterpiece by you. I've been an ardent fan of your writing. (You know I've been going to your websites before...) Man I love your writings. It's KP and not WK anymore. Man go and live out your writings. You rock. _

This is an interesting piece of bishounen torture. It confused me, bemused me, enchanted me, and left me wondering if this is based on the manga or the writer's obviously excellent imagination. All in all, an excellent story that simply begs for a sequel as well as a look at whether this was leading to a threesome with (Sakuya Towa Yuki) in it or not. Personally, I can see a menage a trois coming from this, but I'm a crazy guy, ne?

Wow. Simply wow. Boy, that was hard. Beautifully written and explained only at the end... demo... what happened to the manager? Did he leave?

Will you write a sequel or something?

I loved it.

WA

Oh wow... simply gorgeous! I love the way you interlace the flow of thought. Very interesting and perfectly lovely! Wow... truly breathless. Please write more soon! Love and Peace, Hayla

Wow. -Extremely- powerful, and extremely well done.

Really enjoyed this. Beautifully written piece... your character development was complete and innovative. - Hope to see you write more fics. .-