 geistprinz.ryan 2009-06-11 . chapter 1D: I want more yes!
xD A few more English, preferably, or a hella good translator, thank you. |
 Darkkaiser379 2009-06-06 . chapter 1I don't know whether it was good or not because the summary and Authors notes were the only bits I could read.
Why would you file it under English and write the summary and intro in English but not the actual story. I don't know what language it is but please edit it into the right category. |
 agoodcupoftea 2009-03-20 . chapter 1umm, this is filed under English. Is this Tagalog? |
 Akatsutsumi Ai 2008-12-24 . chapter 5udah kubaca! manteb juga~ ntu yg bikin 5 orang? kumpulan cerpen yah?? saiia tambahin yah? *orang gila: jangan mau critanya ditambahin Ayayuki! nanti jadi ancur! liat aja fanfic karyanya, ancur smua!!"
Ayayuki: diem lo!! *mukul orang gila pake asbak*
eniway, gud story! *padahal bacanya lompat2* |
 KoumiLoccness 2008-09-12 . chapter 1Sup cuz nice ficc...Koumi/Sorato/Taito Out G... |