 Schmacky 9/12/08 . chapter 1 That was interesting, but a little odd. Why did you have Cameron keep referring to her as subject over and over and over again even though she told herself to correct it? A cyborg would only need to do that one. She's a fast learner, right?
Anyway, I don't understand how Sarah got the wound. And I don't really understand why everyone would let Sarah get as sick as she did. Derek would have more sense to call Charley even if Sarah persisted that it was John's call. |