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Sherylp87 12/9/10 . chapter 1
Brilliant! Robot Nanny, i luved it :)
Schmacky 9/12/08 . chapter 1
That was interesting, but a little odd. Why did you have Cameron keep referring to her as subject over and over and over again even though she told herself to correct it? A cyborg would only need to do that one. She's a fast learner, right?

Anyway, I don't understand how Sarah got the wound. And I don't really understand why everyone would let Sarah get as sick as she did. Derek would have more sense to call Charley even if Sarah persisted that it was John's call.
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