You haven't updated in a year. WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!1

cool. please update soon? This sounds l;ike the beginnings of an awesome story!

oh very interesting! I'd love to read more!

oh no! poor Shawn! what happened? please update soon!

This is very intriguing so far. I hope you're going to continue it!

I love the idea! Pretty please update

Hi again! The story is going great! I am so ready for the next chapter! Thabks!

- Princess of the Rose

Hey! You post fast! This makes me very happy, now excuse me I have to R&R your next chapter. Thanks

- Princess of the Rose

can't wait for more

lol, this might seem silly, as this is fanfiction and did not happen in real life, but you've quite offically made up my mind that I'll never let my kid walk to school. (lol, what's really bad is I haven't even reached the end of my first trimester yet, and I'm already making such decisions.)
I do hope you continue soon, and I almost kinda hope that it's a horrible thing that happens, so that when the kid complains I can just show him/her this. XD
Happy writing!

Your beginning ist interesting...but you are breaking a writers rule: A chapter should have at last 10 words to be considered as one. This are only scenes.

This was a good chapter, nice writing and detail. Can't wait to see more.

Wow, I think this is off to an awesome start and I can't wait to read more. I want to know what happened to little Shawn! The suspense is killing me. *L*

Awesome Psych story can't wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Please update it soon ^_^
~Tala~

OMG! please continue!