nawwwwww!

That is sooooo cute!

Loved the one shot and you are right the song is beautiful.

Cute one-shot. I really enjoyed the read XD

Aww, this is so sweet. I love how you kept Inuyasha in character.

Amazing. ^-^

compelling insight on his indecision. i enjoyed miroku's conclusions.

if you haven't heard, the manga has concluded, and they've started broadcasting 'the final act' [remove spaces]

onemanga. com/Inuyasha

shonensunday. com/anime/index. php?ep=167

a pleasure,

ginny

kokoronagomu. deviantart. com

♥

Nice; characters and setting realistic and well done; consistency in writing and in pacing. A few typos, mostly in punctuation, The last two sentences could be stronger if they were rewritten without the “Because” starting both of them, but overall a sweet and strong piece.

nice story... really liked it... good job... great work!

cute!

that was adorable u americans and your fan fictions are so cute im glad that you have written this story IT WAS SO CUTE

i'd love 2 hear kagome's reaction! U should have add a half 4 kagome's pov. But nice story.

are there going to be anymore?

Awwe! CuTeE! I adore that song!

I like this. Nice job. ^_^

awesome!

Wow. Beautiful job. Great shipping analysis, and all from Inuyasha's (and a little of Miroku's) POV. I jumped in my seat when Miroku started talking, I was so into the rest of it. Plus the fact that all of that stuff was true-wonderful job. Faved!