compelling insight on his indecision. i enjoyed miroku's conclusions.

if you haven't heard, the manga has concluded, and they've started broadcasting 'the final act' [remove spaces]

onemanga. com/Inuyasha

shonensunday. com/anime/index. php?ep=167

a pleasure,
ginny
kokoronagomu. deviantart. com
♥

Nice; characters and setting realistic and well done; consistency in writing and in pacing. A few typos, mostly in punctuation, The last two sentences could be stronger if they were rewritten without the “Because” starting both of them, but overall a sweet and strong piece.

nice story... really liked it... good job... great work!

cute!

that was adorable u americans and your fan fictions are so cute im glad that you have written this story IT WAS SO CUTE

i'd love 2 hear kagome's reaction! U should have add a half 4 kagome's pov. But nice story.

are there going to be anymore?

Awwe!! CuTeE!! I adore that song!

I like this. Nice job. ^_^

awesome!

Wow. Beautiful job. Great shipping analysis, and all from Inuyasha's (and a little of Miroku's) POV. I jumped in my seat when Miroku started talking, I was so into the rest of it. Plus the fact that all of that stuff was true--wonderful job. Faved!

Wow, this was so cute! I wonder if you're the same Calender who had fanfics on a site called Hanyou to Miko? It's been years and years since I saw it last, but I'd bet that it's not around anymore. Shame, it had such neat stories! I'm glad I saw this story, it brings back many good memories nonetheless.

Hi,
Great story. Is there going to be more? Maybe Inuyasha tells Kagome he loves her. Wendy

Yay! Miroku smartness!!

Loved your story