  Pokefan 5/22/12 . chapter 24 I always love it when a story brings back the old rivals looking for a second chance. Great story - the only reason i can't reveiw each chapter is because i get too involved in the awesomeness and originality that is this story. keep up the good job. Love it! |
| Pokefan 5/21/12 . chapter 1 Love how you are mixing the game with the anime. very cute. Nice chapter |
| LT. Storm02 3/22/12 . chapter 9 "Rick" is actully in the t.v. show, his offical name is Barry |
| Slapwave 3/11/12 . chapter 34 Sudowoodos a boy, so is Swinub, pachirisu is a girl because she used sweet kiss on pikachu in a episode, and piplups a boy because I remember rowan saying that piplup was a he, and pachiriusu used sweet Kiss on piplup too |
| reiley123 2/21/12 . chapter 31 :q lol i luv this series and if you read this i want to fuck u |
| reiley123 2/21/12 . chapter 29 yay no paul! :p :] :P |
| reiley123 2/20/12 . chapter 28 i just finished this at eleven o clock im sleepy but i like this so far even though im eleven |
 runosawesome5878 12/28/11 . chapter 34I absolutely loved this story! You are really amazing at writing stories! The Ending was fantastic and a perfect ending to a perfect story! I feel sorry for Dawn after what happened to her! So yh loved the story, please write more stories like this one! P.s You really know how to grab the readers attention. Plus Ash a doctor? I never thought that was possible! |
| PickachuPlanet 12/12/11 . chapter 3 Great chapter! :D
But Elekid is electric so I think he is also weak against water-types! |
| Ayshun Dragon 11/29/11 . chapter 23 (How I feel during lemons in chapters 1-23) *forplay* erection sequence initiated. *almost sex* erection reached. *almost there...* NOPE CHUCK TESTA!
FUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCKKKKKKK! |
| Xx shimmering starlight xX 9/30/11 . chapter 9 hi, i am trisha, i am 16, i am using my 9 year old cousin
account to tell you, he DOES appear in the programme, it's barry.
snowy's cousin peachy |
| XxEvangeline.In-My.WorldxX x.x 9/26/11 . chapter 25 OMFG. U DID NOT! PAUL, IMA
FU-KEN MURDER U PATHETIC SORE LOSER!
P.s: I hv figured out who are the three pokemon and the 2 legondaries. :) Took meh long enough though .
-Ama |
| hello kitty ROCKS 9/24/11 . chapter 1 BEST PEARLSHIPPING STORY EvER |
| dudeguypersondude 9/13/11 . chapter 29 Pity I wanted to see Ash kick Paul's ass. |
| SMA-H 9/11/11 . chapter 34 Cool Story. And as for the genders of the Pokemon…
Chimchar has no confirmed gender. I think of it as a boy, though.
Gliscor also has no confirmed gender, but there is a shipping between it and Ash, so girl?
Grotle, again, has no confirmed gender, but it was voiced by a guy, so…
Piplup is a boy. It's confirmed.
Pachirisu may be a girl, but it's unconfirmed. Voiced by a girl, by the way.
Swinub is probably a boy, but that's also unconfirmed. Oddly, it was voiced by a girl as Swinub, but after it evolved, it was voiced by a guy.
And finally, Sudowoodo is a confirmed boy.
I got all this info on bulbapedia. And again, great story! |
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