WOW!

So good!

I love it!

It's so awesome. i always wanted to read something like that !

Very sweet.

aw! just need to add some commas here and there nd t practically perfect!

awh that was SO SWEET

This is a beautiful scene and it really does fit well in the flow of BD. Edward was always contemplative and it was amazing how things turned out. Good job!

I loved it keep on writing btw im new to fan fiction and I was wondering if you could review my story its called Cave Dwellers I would greatly appreciate it