Oh gods...That was so sad...heartbreaking...touching? Either way it was excellent. :D

I think this is a great story. One question, When Ahsoka says "You never...once..called me...Ahsoka...Skywalker" does she mean he never called her Ahsoka or he never called her Ahsoka Skywalker. Please respond.

Holy. Mother. Of. God.

That was good.

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wow. that made me sad.
but not necessarily in a bad way.

wow, this is amaazing! i love the idea (because i was thinking about it too :P ) and the intensity of the whole thing just sends me back to the beginning to read it again. your grammar, spelling and punctuation is very good (I've read too many fanfics with horrible grammar and stuff). Again, amazing story!!

Wow this was incredibly realistic and harsh I loved it! Though it was a heartbreaking end it was entirely plausible and I really loved how he dies with Ahsoka leaving behind only the shadow that is Vader in her wake. Beautifully done!

Great story! Poor Ahsoka.. Poor Anakin... THanks so much for writing this. God bless!

OMG. When I saw the trailer that was, like, my first thought.

So he killed her!

I cried.

That's so sad! Gosh I never even thought about that before. Good story!

This is great!
I'm confused though--who is Ashoka? I don't mind you spoiling the moview for me; I don't plan on watching it.

pretty good yo

I just saw the Clone Wars movie, too, and I also had the exact same question. You answered it perfectly! It made me cry so now my brother is laughing at me. Some brother. Anyway, very well done. I love the way you write your little vignettes.

Wow. A strong piece. I am not familiar with expanded universe, but this story really was heart breaking, and opened even to me. Good work!

Oh Force, no. Poor Ahsoka.
I'm been wondering too what would happen, but... That was so sad.
A great story.
May the Force be with you.