Awesome fic Kali! - Later!

God I love this, my favorite part has to be:

“Check it, it’s a Raph-o-lantern!”

“How ‘bout I carve you a new face, pumpkin boy?”

That is just pure genius, absolutely hilarious!

I hope that is not the end of the story though, I really want to know what happens next and what that box is all about.

Heya, kali, great story. you really set a great halloween atmosphere to the whole story, very strange and mysterious. you write action and fighting scenes very well, keeping the action going.

if you ever decide to edit this story, i'd prolong the suspense a bit, when the turtles find themselves in strange places. take a little more time to describe the setting. i don't know if you're planning on explaining what actually happened, or if you left the story unresolved on purpose. in any case, the writing is great. i'm very impressed.

This was great! I love Mikey at the beginning, hehe, playing pranks...hey, u had me glued to my seat! great job!