such heart, such meaning...no Jacob...I loved it


Why did it have to end? :o(

I love your writing style, and your lemons rocked!


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This story is amazing.
So real...
Just thought I should let you know.
You're my favorite author :-)

You know, I really liked that ending! Normally I would complain that we didn't actually get to see the proposal... but you totally pulled it off! Especially the fact that Edward knew his elaborate plans would go out the window and how he just put the ring on Bella's finger and she held it close to her while she was sleeping and all... That was so sweet! And when Edward just came in and said "I love you" just because he could... So great! I REALLY liked the ending!

I guess the only thing I had a problem with in this story was the fact that Edward came off as somewhat pushy when it came to the physical aspect of his and Bella's relationship... I'm not sure if you meant it that way, but I was particularly bothered when they started dating and Edward seemed incredibly impatient to get straight back to the sex. And again, maybe you weren't intending for him to appear quite so forward with that aspect of their relationship and almost trying to rush the sex, but I thought it came off that way sometimes and it sort-of turned me off of Edward's character at times... Obviously it didn't turn me off of him ENOUGH to say that I didn't like the story, but I think it could have been reigned in a little bit.

Nice job - I really enjoyed this story!

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

Oh, man... Love in an Elevator... Reminds me of Aerosmith! ;)

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

I like this trip away from everything - nice idea!

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

Aw, man! We all knew that was coming... But it still sucked to see Bella go through that!

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

I'm glad the dates seem to be getting progressively less-awkward! And they finally talked and said I love you again! GOOD!

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

Loved the awkward discussion at the lunchroom table... I don't want Edward and Bella's previous experience to come out in the open quite yet... but I definitely think it should somewhere down the road! :D Can't wait for the date!

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

Now he just needs to take her out on a date! :D Start fresh and do it the right way! Show her he's really serious, you know?

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

FINALLY!

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

I liked this chapter! At first I was confused, but you did a good job of it - basically explaining Edward's actions and feelings up until the current moment in the story - nice!

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

Aw, that's great! I doubt they'll admit they have feelings for each other... but maybe they will and then they'll just date in secret for the rest of the story! :D

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

Good, an apology is coming! I hope Bella apologizes as well... and then Edward insists on giving Bella the REAL first-time that she should remember and cherish... :D

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

WHOA - go Bella! Way to be assertive and know what you want! :D And I adore her jealous side... I just hope we get to see Edward's jealous side sometime soon... :D

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia

GAH! I loved this football scene, but I really hope that at the start of the next chapter, Edward will push Jessica and Lauren away and run after Bella before she can leave!

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia