I think Bella and Edward's friendship is headed for dangerous territory. With their connection, I don't see how they can stay 'just friends'. Edward being the sexual teacher...made me laugh. What a guy!

I liked this EPOV. Edward is just trying to figure things out. He can't see himself without Bella, but he really doesn't see what that exactly means. Bella is his friend, who he knows intimately, but could there be more. Enjoying!

I liked this first chapter and I am intrigued by Edward and Bella's relationship and where it's headed. You can see their obvious connection, but they just view it as friendship. Edward kind of gets the best of the relationship. He can date and come back to Bella's comfort. Ofcourse this is through Bella's eyes...who knows what Edward is really thinking...

Cutee :)

i love it :)

as you can see it makes me smile :)

great story

Such a perfect, sweet ending, wouldn't want it any different. Edward's being too adorkable!

Beautiful story. You're a great writer, I'm looking forward to read more of your stuff. Thanks so much for sharing this story with us!

I think i'm in love with your writing. I don't know how to explain, but it almost seem like you write on instincts... You really know your characters (their feelings, thoughts and reactions) and this is rare in my humble opinion. Nothing irks me more than unrealistic dialogues and writers being overdescriptive. Your story just flows, reading this story is like taking a journey in the minds of e/b. And I'm thoroughly enjoying it!

I also would like to say that, unlike a lot of other ffs, I rather liked reading your a/n. :) You seem like a sweet and down-to-earth girl.

Anyway, I'm gonna finish the rest of this little gem and I can't wait to read more of your creations.

Thanks for writing!

i just finished reading your story it was very good, you did a wonderful job...

such heart, such meaning...no Jacob...I loved it

Why did it have to end? :o(

I love your writing style, and your lemons rocked!

x

This story is amazing.

So real...

Just thought I should let you know.

You're my favorite author :-)

You know, I really liked that ending! Normally I would complain that we didn't actually get to see the proposal... but you totally pulled it off! Especially the fact that Edward knew his elaborate plans would go out the window and how he just put the ring on Bella's finger and she held it close to her while she was sleeping and all... That was so sweet! And when Edward just came in and said "I love you" just because he could... So great! I REALLY liked the ending!

I guess the only thing I had a problem with in this story was the fact that Edward came off as somewhat pushy when it came to the physical aspect of his and Bella's relationship... I'm not sure if you meant it that way, but I was particularly bothered when they started dating and Edward seemed incredibly impatient to get straight back to the sex. And again, maybe you weren't intending for him to appear quite so forward with that aspect of their relationship and almost trying to rush the sex, but I thought it came off that way sometimes and it sort-of turned me off of Edward's character at times... Obviously it didn't turn me off of him ENOUGH to say that I didn't like the story, but I think it could have been reigned in a little bit.

Nice job - I really enjoyed this story!

Yours truly,

Amelia Bedelia

Oh, man... Love in an Elevator... Reminds me of Aerosmith! ;)

Yours truly,

Amelia Bedelia

I like this trip away from everything - nice idea!

Yours truly,

Amelia Bedelia

Aw, man! We all knew that was coming... But it still sucked to see Bella go through that!

Yours truly,

Amelia Bedelia

I'm glad the dates seem to be getting progressively less-awkward! And they finally talked and said I love you again! GOOD!

Yours truly,

Amelia Bedelia