This was totally brilliantly written! I LOVED the level of banter. "This is the type of good luck we have too much of" That was adorable! Totally totally nice job on this!

LOL XD - that was fantastic, I was chuckling the whole way through :D ... especially love Sammy's snark about the cost of the headstone LOL XD - thanks for the awesome read :D
Hugs and luv
Mish :D

That was just one big laugh fest for me! XD They so need to put that in the show, it's just too perfect and amazing!

You got the witty banter down perfectly, and it was just pure win. :D

cute story. I bet it was rabid.

*laughs* Could have come right out of an episode, I swear!

VERY cute and funny.

My favorite part was this: “You be sure to put that on my headstone: Here Lies Dean Winchester. Died from a bite by a rare albino hedgehog. They aren't native to the area and it didn't have rabies because it wasn't FOAMING AT THE MOUTH!”
Sam let the silence sit for all of four seconds before he couldn't contain himself.
“Okay, first of all, I thought you wanted cremation.”
“Sam.”
“Second, I think that's too long to put on a headstone, plus they charge by the letter and that's going to be one expensive headstone at this rate.”
ROTFL LOVED the banter--I'm so missing it on the show at the moment.

Other lines that made me giggle: “Still. I don't need a lucky hedgehog with vampiric tendencies.”
“Do you have to keep it or can you just catch and release?”

Nice job on this!

This was hysterical - I'm so glad you got the SNFA award. Just wonderful banter.

Phoebe

I giggled my my way through this and read half of it to my friends. Does Dean know that a rabies shot is administered in your butt? And not normally by attractive nurses either...

OMG, that was so hilarious! Seriously, my jaw is aching I was grinning so much. Poor Dean, getting bitten by either an albino hedgehog or a mystical good luck creature. Only the Winchesters..

You really had their voices spot on and this was so in character I could actually picture it.

Great job :)

Hehehe, that was cute :) I really enjoyed the Sam-Dean interaction...perfectly in-character! Keep up the great work.

Shinigami06

Haha... cute. Dean would whine about that kind of thing.

Great work!

-Alyssa

Where to even start? This was freakin' hilarious! I don't even know where to begin. I could just 'hear' Dean. The expressions and the movements were absolutely perfect. Poking at his hand, waving it in Sam's face, trying to stomp a mythical creature. It isn't surprising that it took a bite out of him!

Very well written. Sparse, mostly dialogue, and so perfectly in character for both boys in that mood. In the mood where you really wonder if Sam was the oldest. Changleling maybe . . . ?

Very good, very fun, and very, very funny.

Awesome!

Lol I liked that, that was funny XD
Nice work ^^

LMFAO! DAMN! This made me fall off my chair laughing. Great work!