Excellent!
That's what I call a good peice of work!
To explore the idea that by doing good she's giving
into the darkness is the kind of irony I often search for.

Never can anything escape the fire unscorched. You can write a whole story about how this seed of evil, this tainting resurfaces later on.

Yes, it was short, but it was worth it.

Love it.

Wow! This is a great piece! I really liked the repetition there at the end; it really drove the point home. Great job!

that was amazing. i absolutely loved this. spectularly written. great job! i am speechless, save for what i just said.

Very well written. This could work as an ongoing story - you've got a good think going with it!

That was truly awesome! I hope you will write MANY more stories. This one made my "favorites" list. What a wonderful description of corruption!

Well done!

That was beautifully written. I love the twisting of her deeds, and the irony behind them. I hope to see more from you. :-)

Excellent insight. Quite beautiful. I hope to see more from you.