That was very, very good. *insert a little heart here*

This is so far after I first read this that it's not even funny. But since that first time, I've read it thrice. Which means it's good.

I really love the way you wrote this.

Just thought I should let you know :)

Wow emotional, I loved it and the title is perfect!

This was a very nice one-shot! Is this set in an alternate universe? Anyways, it was well written, and I liked it because you didn't just say how things were what they were, but you hinted at things and made it slightly mysterious, but not too much so that we wouldn't get it...I hope that makes sense. xD I really liked this line:

The night is cool and smells like rain—reminds him of Sasuke and all he can't have. Not now, not yet—possibly not ever.

Good job; keep it up! ^_^

Your writing style is rather unique and always a pleasant to read, so it's really lovely to read something new from you.

As always, the story is really sensual, just oozing raw feelings and emotions. It's even more amazing because it's SuiSasu, which actually is one of my favourites. You don't get to read it all that much, which is really disappointing, and it's always great to find something with those two.

And as I said, the one-shot is really good, but it just screams 'continue'. And not only because it would be pure love to see more of the SuiSasu, but because after reading you just get this need to know more, to know what had happened before and what's going to happen to them and yeah... (: so, thank you for sharing such a nice piece and if you ever get in the right mood to continue this, please do it ^^~ cheers

Some back story would have been nice, but I like the emotions you've portrayed, and the first two sentences of that last paragraph.

(By the way, that thing about writing more during school-time? That's me too. Though I, too, don't know why :))

*loves*

very good...simple, but highly effective

thank you for adding to the small amout of good sasusui out there...

^.^

ElfArrow

Yey for Sasu/Sui!