 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-11-14 . chapter 11Another great chapter! I love your flash back scene, especially the part with the young lenny and victor, love it |
 Octovan 2009-11-08 . chapter 10Oh darn. Did I leave my copy of "Mind Invasion for Dummies" at Vince's house again?
Lino and the gang with sleeping bags. Sounds like a camping vacation. xD Good job! This story amuses me. |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-11-08 . chapter 10Finally some answers, awesome chapter! |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-10-17 . chapter 9Great chapter! worth the wait, I can't wait till Victor tells them what he knows |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-09-01 . chapter 8Ok now I have GOT to hear what else happens. Is victor now having his mind invaded? Answers, I need answers! |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-09-01 . chapter 7Ok, this was definitely and awesome chapter! When a story makes me read more than one chapter a day it's a good story. I'm not lying when I say this. Lenny's outburst is played out so realistically . Lenny's depression rampage is such a familiar setting for me that to read it in words is epic. I am blown away. I hope Lenny feels better soon though. He's my fav! |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-08-30 . chapter 5I was hoping you'd have Lenny and Victory hang out sometime soon. I like the brotherly concept. It's very heartfelt. |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-08-27 . chapter 2Ok, I have to say I love this story's plot so far and closeness between the family members. It seems to be a really great start. I'm offically hooked on this story. Get it? "Hooked" |
 Octovan 2009-08-10 . chapter 7DAMN! Lenny was on his period! That's it! Do I get my prize now? :)
Anyway, keep up the good work, mate!
Luca: Yeah!
O: Whoot! |
 ghostwriter2691 2009-08-04 . chapter 7uh oh, someone's getting a little uptight. give us all another update soon... |
 KnucklesRedFury207.2 2009-07-14 . chapter 6Oh being watched! Not good! Especially since it's who I practically KNOW who it is! Update soon! |
 Octovan 2009-07-04 . chapter 6Whoot for Metal Octopus 67! :)
Honestly, I love this little story of yours, and if I haven't told you yet, I have been checking in on it every time I get on here. Of course, being a Luca fan, it wouldn't hurt to include him a bit more *hintnudgewinkwink*
Keep on writing!
~O |
 ghostwriter2691 2009-07-04 . chapter 6OMG… another chapter, dude you’re my hero. sorry I didn’t review this sooner, but I was on a vacation where there was no internet. can you upload another chapter please, I wanna see who the stalker was! even though I can probably only guess... |
 ghostwriter2691 2009-05-18 . chapter 5hey, I was wondering when you were gonna update. I've been checking this site for any updates, but never really had the heart to review. anyway keep up the good work. I'm startng to enjoy this story. |
 LimesInHeaven 2009-05-15 . chapter 5This was great as ever.
Hopefully, you update soon. |