 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-11-21 . chapter 12Loved it! I was waiting for victor to tell him. It's obvious know that he thinks of lino as a father. It's a good thing you like writing father/son scenes, because you are really good at it, and I mean that. |
 ghostwriter2691 2009-11-20 . chapter 11hey, sorry i havent reviewed in a while, you type the best stories, i only have two things... number 1 your last few chapters were great. you're really keeping us in suspence.. and number 2 (as embarrassing as it seems) i'm having a little trouble adding a new chapter to my story could i get some advice from you please... |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-11-14 . chapter 11Another great chapter! I love your flash back scene, especially the part with the young lenny and victor, love it |
 Octovan 2009-11-08 . chapter 10Oh darn. Did I leave my copy of "Mind Invasion for Dummies" at Vince's house again?
Lino and the gang with sleeping bags. Sounds like a camping vacation. xD Good job! This story amuses me. |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-11-08 . chapter 10Finally some answers, awesome chapter! |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-10-17 . chapter 9Great chapter! worth the wait, I can't wait till Victor tells them what he knows |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-09-01 . chapter 8Ok now I have GOT to hear what else happens. Is victor now having his mind invaded? Answers, I need answers! |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-09-01 . chapter 7Ok, this was definitely and awesome chapter! When a story makes me read more than one chapter a day it's a good story. I'm not lying when I say this. Lenny's outburst is played out so realistically . Lenny's depression rampage is such a familiar setting for me that to read it in words is epic. I am blown away. I hope Lenny feels better soon though. He's my fav! |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-08-30 . chapter 5I was hoping you'd have Lenny and Victory hang out sometime soon. I like the brotherly concept. It's very heartfelt. |
 Joe 'Po' Navark 2009-08-27 . chapter 2Ok, I have to say I love this story's plot so far and closeness between the family members. It seems to be a really great start. I'm offically hooked on this story. Get it? "Hooked" |
 Octovan 2009-08-10 . chapter 7DAMN! Lenny was on his period! That's it! Do I get my prize now? :)
Anyway, keep up the good work, mate!
Luca: Yeah!
O: Whoot! |
 ghostwriter2691 2009-08-04 . chapter 7uh oh, someone's getting a little uptight. give us all another update soon... |
 KnucklesRedFury207.2 2009-07-14 . chapter 6Oh being watched! Not good! Especially since it's who I practically KNOW who it is! Update soon! |
 Octovan 2009-07-04 . chapter 6Whoot for Metal Octopus 67! :)
Honestly, I love this little story of yours, and if I haven't told you yet, I have been checking in on it every time I get on here. Of course, being a Luca fan, it wouldn't hurt to include him a bit more *hintnudgewinkwink*
Keep on writing!
~O |
 ghostwriter2691 2009-07-04 . chapter 6OMG… another chapter, dude you’re my hero. sorry I didn’t review this sooner, but I was on a vacation where there was no internet. can you upload another chapter please, I wanna see who the stalker was! even though I can probably only guess... |