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Joe 'Po' Navark
2009-11-14 . chapter 11
Another great chapter! I love your flash back scene, especially the part with the young lenny and victor, love it
Octovan
2009-11-08 . chapter 10
Oh darn. Did I leave my copy of "Mind Invasion for Dummies" at Vince's house again?

Lino and the gang with sleeping bags. Sounds like a camping vacation. xD Good job! This story amuses me.
Joe 'Po' Navark
2009-11-08 . chapter 10
Finally some answers, awesome chapter!
Joe 'Po' Navark
2009-10-17 . chapter 9
Great chapter! worth the wait, I can't wait till Victor tells them what he knows
Joe 'Po' Navark
2009-09-01 . chapter 8
Ok now I have GOT to hear what else happens. Is victor now having his mind invaded? Answers, I need answers!
Joe 'Po' Navark
2009-09-01 . chapter 7
Ok, this was definitely and awesome chapter! When a story makes me read more than one chapter a day it's a good story. I'm not lying when I say this. Lenny's outburst is played out so realistically . Lenny's depression rampage is such a familiar setting for me that to read it in words is epic. I am blown away. I hope Lenny feels better soon though. He's my fav!
Joe 'Po' Navark
2009-08-30 . chapter 5
I was hoping you'd have Lenny and Victory hang out sometime soon. I like the brotherly concept. It's very heartfelt.
Joe 'Po' Navark
2009-08-27 . chapter 2
Ok, I have to say I love this story's plot so far and closeness between the family members. It seems to be a really great start. I'm offically hooked on this story. Get it? "Hooked"
Octovan
2009-08-10 . chapter 7
DAMN! Lenny was on his period! That's it! Do I get my prize now? :)

Anyway, keep up the good work, mate!

Luca: Yeah!
O: Whoot!
ghostwriter2691
2009-08-04 . chapter 7
uh oh, someone's getting a little uptight. give us all another update soon...
KnucklesRedFury207.2
2009-07-14 . chapter 6
Oh being watched! Not good! Especially since it's who I practically KNOW who it is! Update soon!
Octovan
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
Whoot for Metal Octopus 67! :)

Honestly, I love this little story of yours, and if I haven't told you yet, I have been checking in on it every time I get on here. Of course, being a Luca fan, it wouldn't hurt to include him a bit more *hintnudgewinkwink*

Keep on writing!

~O
ghostwriter2691
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
OMG… another chapter, dude you’re my hero. sorry I didn’t review this sooner, but I was on a vacation where there was no internet. can you upload another chapter please, I wanna see who the stalker was! even though I can probably only guess...
ghostwriter2691
2009-05-18 . chapter 5
hey, I was wondering when you were gonna update. I've been checking this site for any updates, but never really had the heart to review. anyway keep up the good work. I'm startng to enjoy this story.
LimesInHeaven
2009-05-15 . chapter 5
This was great as ever.
Hopefully, you update soon.
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