 pixie paramount 2008-09-28 . chapter 1;fja;jfjafj;affa;lfja;
YOU, OFFICIALLY, OWN MY FREAKING HEART.
You write Kal so convincingly, so heartlessly, and you write Chloe so subtlely, yet it still comes out as her a-and, omg, I can not help but feel bad for the poor thing. ;A;
A-and, omg, the whole thing is just breathtaking. Ever word has a purpose. Every. Single. One.
And that ending? So fucking amazing. I-it's such a powerful, resonating ending a-and, omg, I love you so much bb. ;A;
- Pixie |
 Kit Merlot 2008-09-13 . chapter 1Poor Chloe, she loves Clark but all he can think of is making things up to the completely worthless Lana Lang--Chloe deserves better than that.
But good for Chloe for choosing to live a lie, for choosing to keep her dignity rather then chase after Clark only to get rejected again.
Great work on this fic :) |