lol at was a sucky first...lol but funny as hell

That was great! your right, it wasn't anything magical...but it sure was entertaining :D

lol thats just funny haha u should continue. i would love to see wat happens after.

That was really good.

Very well written & humorous.

"How would putting this 'condom' on your head prevent that."

Couldn't stop laughing.

Congrats.

Exuse me...(runs to the other room to die of laughter)
-2 hours later-
Haha...ha...THIS...THIS, my friend, THEY, should put this...haha...in sex ED!Hahaa...Ha..Oh dear, my head hurts now...haha...Anyway, joking aside, it is as you say. Quite a wake-up call to all lemons and hentai, ESPECIALLY hentai. Well, like some of my friend's say "First times a bitch";)

wow Lord Fluffy! You're right about lemons... LMAO!

“WHAT THE HELL?! I CAN’T FEEL ANYTHING WITH THIS DAMN THING ON!”

ROFL! Good Lord, TQ, you've OUTDONE yourself! I wish I read this when you posted it, but oddly, it refused to let me read. (I can see why--it was so "naughty". -laugh-)

Yes, this has taught me a valuable lesson about first times in fiction. I'm guilty of my stuff being "perfect"--so this'll definitely help me for reference the next time I write one. XD

Awesome like always. ;)

oh man! that is so true. this story reminds me of SO many people i know. ahah!

I remember my first time. It wasn't all that awkward because he had experience. Hurt like hell though, and a few times after. Definitely more realistic then lemons where they know what exactly what they're doing, there's minimal pain, mutiple orgasms, and simultaneous climaxes.

This May Sound Wierd But I Thought That Was A Very Cute Story. Inuyasha Was His Typical Stubborn, Adorable Self-- Just With Some Naughty Urges. I Loved Kagome's Explanation Of A Condom. This Is Exactly The Way I Would See Their First Time. (But I'm Not Saying I Hate The Sweet, Beautiful Version Of The First Time. Because Sometimes We Like To Imagine The Perfect First Time). I Managed To Laugh And Blush At Their Awkwardness At The Same Time. ^w^

LOL!! Wow...I've gotta say that this was hilarious! Out of all those 'first' lemons and stuff I say this is the best! It sounds about right lol

Rofl this was hilarious. And I totally agree with you on the whole lemon thing. The only bit that confused me was when he broke her hymen (I didn't bleed at all my first time) and I thought for a minute she'd gotten her period and they'd have to stop again. Which would have been hilarious XD Overall i thought it was well written and very funny. Props! :D

This was really funny, and I know it's going to stick in my head for awhile and appear at random moments to make me laugh. great job! :)
sincerely, nihongoneko

hehe. i lyked it.
:D

HAHAHAHAHAHA!! Oh man I love it!! Its awesome! Yeah it really is about realistic first times! I hope to read more of your stories in the future!