i love how you put the true story in with your own, i really enjoy reading what i went through in the game. ^_^ 100 our of 10

:D i just started playing the game and i prefer your version XD

Well done. I can really feel the characters. Wish I could write like that. review my story and tell me whats wrong about it okay.

Wow! Brilliant! Keep it up. I'm adding this story to my alerts so update soon!

Nice novelization. Keep up the good work.

I really like what you've got here. I just finished watching Eternal Sonata, and I love that you're writing a story about it. I can't wait to see more.

:D I'm so glad that topok my email, now all Eternal Sonata fans can jump with joy 8D

I love this fic... :) your describtion is amazing

PS: Where do you think Frederic sleeps?

You are so amazing when it comes to writing. I can't wait until you become an author and release a lovely book for people to read. Other than that one spelling error I pointed out to you already, this is great grammar wise. [At least, I believe so XD] I'm excited for Chapter 2! The way you wrote it made it easy to understand, even if I had a little bit more background.

Another good chapter! I'm interested to see more of these original chars, but they seem to fit in good right now! Cool name too, the Deceptive Cadence. I always wondered what Waltz did with his free time. ha ha

Great beginning! It made me feel just like I was playing the game! Can't wait to see where you take this. There isn't enough ES fics out there.

Fantastic second chapter! I have no problem following the story either, even though I've never played! I've already got a fondness for the characters, even this early in! Great job!

I love the first chapter! Beautifully written! The dialogue was wonderful and the imagery! Especially the part with "Heaven's Mirror". I loved it! So well written!