Totally sweet and heart wrenching.

oh dear, i think i might cry... i love Fred! good story.

Wow...nice story. I like how you wrote. Loved the ending too. Fred really is one of the greatest characters ever. We shall miss him! :'((

I like it. Nicely written.

I like the way you use the flashback.

this was really great and everyone was in character. I can really see this happening in the books.