this was awsome. you have a lot of talent, keep up the good work.

Aww what? Finished? That chapter was great, and just like Chaotic Century it sucked because it's over. Funny how even when they end on a good note, sometimes you feel more sad that something is finished despite that you should be happy for the character whose sad story has come to an end.
Twisted I know but that's what I think anyway.
Great work.

T.T

Really? The end? Parting is such sweet sorrow...

Sorry, always wanted to say that. ^^;

This was a great ending to a fabulous fic. It summed everything up perfectly. I loved it! ^-^

Ahh... Vega needs a hug! XD

And Fury just seemed perfect... and really cute. ^-^ lol. I really liked how this summed everything up, and how realistic Vega and everyones' reactions were. Brilliant work Cat!! :)

Awesome job!! Im sad to see it end, but it was a great ending. Great work Cat!! ^-^

~Ibeyla ^^

Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful! I loved your battle scene; so full of action and suspense! Poor Vega... he was consumed with revenge and hate when, really, he deserves so much more...

Update soon!

Damn, poor Tigers and Sand Devils; they suffered for the Blitz Team's mistake... Oh well. No use in crying over spilled milk, right?

Anyway, loved the interaction with the Blitz Team again, especially the interaction between Bit, Leena, Brad, and their Zoids; definitely a reminder of Chaotic Century. Keep writing!

Very nice. Loved the whole "I defeated Vega last time, and I'll do it again" persona that Bit gives off; very reminiscent of Van, no?

The whole "Who's Charlie?" "Leader of the Twisters; why?" "No reason." interaction between Brad and Naomi was excellent; I loved it! They really do remind me of Irvine and Moonbay, which is probably why they're a fav. couple of mine.

Keep writing!

Where is my mind?! I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to find this wonderful story again! Anyway... loved this. Very nice introspective into Vega's mind and seeing how his guilt at killing the Count eventually led to his condemning Bit for what happened.

Also loved the trip to check up on the Blitz Team.

Keep writing!

Aww... poor Vega. XP This was a great chapter cat!! I liked it!! The fight was so good! I was on the edge of my seat the entire time!! ^-^

Glad to see no one died or was too badly hurt!! XD

Anyway, good chapter! Very quickly put up in your standards. Took me by surprise. XP lol. Anyway, very good chapter cat!! ;D

~Ibeyla ^^

Totaly awsome! Great fight descriptions with lots of suspence. I can't wait to see how this turns out. Will Vega finnaly come back? How does it all end? I can't stand it, lol. Please hurry.

9TailedFox.

Oh no, it's begining to sound final.
Ah well, the best things always have an ending, otherwise you wind up with something like DragonballGT or a fan fiction. Oh, wait.
This is a fan fiction isn't it, it rocks! Yep yep!

awsome, better than i expected. keep up the great job, and update soon.

good job girl keep it up

It's good to see that 'Consumed' hasn't been shelved, I love reading it. Just a little typo which you've probably already found or been told about 'Liger Zero flopped down on the lounge' don't you mean Liger Zero's pilot?
Gonna be some crushin' if you didn't.
Still an awesome read, keep it up!

Incredible!! I don't mind that it was short. It was awsome. I love the way you right with so much description and intensity. It's mezmerising. If you really do want to make it longer though I suppose you could add a little scene with Bit and Leena showing her concern, but that could get mushy and I don't think you want that. Anyway, it was very good and I hope you update soon.

Before I go, I did notice one small mistake. When Bit plops down on the couch after the let down you use the frase Liger Zero pilot, only you forgot "pilot" so it sounds like liger is jumping on the couch. Lol, made me think funny thoughts. Well that's all. Happy writing.

9TailedFox.

can't wait til the battle scene. hope you update soon.