Love This!

Such a promising What If story this. Matt being the younger and darker one of the siblings. A shame it was so long ago it was last updated.

I was actually looking forward to reading this, and its been forever since you updated it... ;_;

Hey, I liked it, would like for you to continue but since it's been so long since you updated, I kinda highly doubt it. Anyway, it's an awesome story with some serious potential. You should do more with it.

More story!
This is great!
The second chapter kinda threw me a bit...

Cool idea! I'm liking it, so far. BTW, how old is Matt in this story?

I love original stories, and yours is one of the best ideas out there. Your writing is excellent. Keep up the good work.

More of this story PLEASE!!!!PLEASE!!!!PLEASE!!!!!

Awsome chapter.. so very serious.. poor matt

Wow, I'm liking this! Continue soon!

Please continue this story. It has fantastic potential.

Please continue!

That was chilling. It's one of the best and most amazing fics I've ever read; my only complaint is that it makes my own work seem shabby by comparison. I really hope that you'll continue this someday, there aren't that many fics out there about Matt McGinnis, and I think that your alternative universe is stunningly real. Please continue.

powerful...the ending is so haunting

That's so sad. Poor Matt! ~Michelle