i know its been a year since you wrote a chapter but i hope you write one soon ^_^

~Yuki~

Gr! I love and hate the cliffys at the same time more please and soon!

You cant tell right now but im laughing like an idiot right now because of your story it was so good!!

Awesomeness! great detail

You've really put them into character, so well done :)
Update soon, Kudasai ^^

Wow...awkward~~!!

i just read chapter 3 and i must say its good and yes you are leaving a lot of cliffhangers. plz do another chapter i wanna see wat happenese between ryou and ichigo elliot/zoey.

OMG you have to carry on i want to see what happense next. plz carry on it was just getting to the intense bit as well :(. i hope you will update it.

love it keep it going

WRITE MORE!

It's really cute!!
I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Aw...you haven't added it since October...

haha! i wanna know what happens next! ja ne!~ PLEASE! UPDATE~ ASAP~!

kyaa!! kiss him already! ja ne!~ PLEASE! UPDATE~ ASAP~!

hahaha! thats hilarious! i love it!! ja ne!~ PLEASE! UPDATE~ ASAP~!

OMG UPDATE SOON NYA