hi, like it so far. please write more. tanks

So uh, when are you going to finally get Charlie and Paul together?
Soon... please?

love it!

I love it! Please upload soon! even though it's been two years...

please continue :)

i love it! Update soon!

I Like It. It's very good, maybe you could start another one? Please? :)

luv it!

update soon please!

-Luna Carter

YAY! The next chapter, o it's getting really good and you can almost feel the heat between Charlize and Paul. And of cause the Warden wants to make a deal cuz he's scared they'll win hehe. Great work!

OMG finally i was waiting for another chapter of this story to come up and i'm glad you made another chapter...please continuing with this story-

great. I cant wait for more.

Hey this is really good! Keep writing, it's getting good!

Paul and Charlie... you can sense the chemistry lol

Please write somemore please!

Ok you are going to write the next chapter weither you want to or not!This is the first...ok 3rd story I read about the longest yard and it's myfavourite so far...Oh you know what should happen, like the inmates are playing, someone loses grip on the ball and goes flying towards charlie, but she catches it and everyone is like, 'Holy shit man' hehe I have had a little bit too much sugar...anyway write it's awsome -...hm also maybe Charlie get's beat up a bit by a gurad...ok I'll shut up now

I really like how the story is going. Please continue and update!Soon!

Katt