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i love the angst in this. excellent job

I think your rendition was great and touching. You took the baby steps that every relationship should have, building up to the full blown running into love. Keep up the good work and continue with the chapters. When I fell in love with my fiancee he wooed my in old english verse and when he asked me to marry him it was a poem that went like this "My lovely Lady Catherine, I your beholder Sir Nicholas do asketh thee to walk with me among rose covered gardens and sunswept paths to eternity. Every woman would like the to fall in love with a man who takes his time building up to a cresentio.