I really enjoy your story. I always love Sousuke X Kaname pairing and you just made this bond great in this story.
I like the way you wrote the progress Sousuke tries to make things better for Kaname, it just like him in the anime, may be a little bit out but it shows progress in him as a human.
Looking forward on your next work. Good Job.

wow! this is a very nice, romantic story.. pls make another one fanfic! ^^

Yes, I'm alive. It's been crazy. My oldest is driving now, which is one of the many things that has me running around like I'm nuts - lol!
More importantly, I hope that you will continue to get better.
On to the story. What can I say but of course, another fantastic piece of work from you. The dressing like Rambo comment was too cute. I loved all of the dialogue between all of the characters, which is something that you're so great at. You make it really believable. The ending was so sweet. I loved the way they were together; just content to know how the other felt. Awesome job!
Please forgive me for not being in touch, but you have always been in my prayers.

That was very cute. I really enjoyed reading it. thank you. :)

You kept them in character and the feeling of the series itself.

AH! (A shreik mixed with surprise and enormous glee!) I'm so glad to discover that you're home and doing well and then I see that you've been up to your usual. Cranking out wonderful stories! I'm so sorry that my review was delayed my friend and hope that you'll accept my apology.

This was a wonderful conclusion to a beautiful story. I laughed in some areas and puddled up in others. Loved the flashback scene; LOL when Sousuke pulled that creep aside and threatened him for making a pass at Kaname only to have her whack him for going overboard; and absolutely adored the ending. Sousuke had gone all out to show how very special Kaname was to him and he didn't disappoint her. Simply enchanting!

I'm so thrilled to see you at work again my friend. Please take care of yourself. I'll be contacting you via phone soon.

Wow. Just when you think Sousuke can't get a clue as to how to act in front of a woman...he certainly went above and beyond the "call of duty" for this mission! It's amazing how sweet and gentle he can be with Kaname, and yet such a hard soldier when he has to be.
Sorry to see this one end, my friend. All the details you put into writing it show what an amazing writer are you. So, the inevitable question: what's next? You know, you WERE watching Gundam Wing last night...!

Wow! I've been waiting for this to update for so long. Great stuff, but in all honesty I was a little sad at the ending. But this is your story and not mine and all around it was a great one! I hope you write more!

Good job,good luck!

Oh my you finished it ...

I loved it...

I hope everything is going better for you and we will be honored with more of your writings in the future...

Please take care of your self

regards

LeRukia

What a great chapter! Filled with so many elements! I'm so glad that Ren and Sempai H. were able to convince Kaname that what she thought she saw really wasn't. A misunderstanding that could've led to the demise of her relationship with Sousuke. And Kaname's reaction was sweet; not thinking that she measured up simply because she didn't feel she was feminine enough for our hero. Seems like the worthy heroines are the ones who aren't girly, but tough in their own right. And despite the ending here; Sousuke really did win the fight. Though he claimed that Kaname had nothing to do with it to Tsubake, she was at the center of it, in my opinion. Though I must admit I hate that Sousuke didn't get in the last physical punch, he got the girl. That alone should make Tsubake eat crow after announcing that he would be the one to take Kaname to the dance. Would've been nice to have Sousuke say "Eat your heart out jerk!" Fantastic piece of work here!

Another awesome chapter...although the ending was NOT what I expected.

It was nice to know that Kaname was made aware of the fact that Sosuke was **not** "playing the field** but was only trying to learn how to be more romantic with her.

The fight and Sosuke's preparations for the same...it is good he prepared so well, and it was a bit of a shock when he lost to that arrogant Tsubaki.

However, it left the perfect opening for Kaname to care for him. Loved the romance of the ending...

Beautifully done, and I hope we can see more soon. Thanks for R & Ring my Star Blazers works, BTW. Glad for the feedback...

FREDDO

this is a sweet fanfiction and the anime is awesome

IT has been awhile … and I was not disappointed…. Your descriptions where perfect… he lost the fight but won the girl back… Excellent. I await your next chapter release

Regards,

Le Rukia

go sosueke. great job of wining the girl out. best of luck for him on the dance

Great job. Good luck!