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A very good story! How come you didn't finish it? I would have loved discovering the others' point of view you know?

So a very good story, even if I think that Beat is deeply interesting in woman, you know what I mean? I can't picture him refusing Gum's proposition but if that's how you see him! :)

I hope that maybe one day you'll finish this awesome story!

See you! ;)

I like this, it's very good. The story is interesting in the way it follows what happens in the game but embellishes on to it, giving it more depth and making it very enjoyable to read. I also like the relationships and history you've given the characters with each other. Very cool. I guess you're not planning on updating, judging from the last update date, but I just wanted to tell you I enjoyed reading, and I think the story is very good :)

Wow, I love this story. It's very good and I love how you write the characters. I like how you get to see the story from each of the characters point of view. It is also very nice to see how they had come to be the way they are today. I have to say, I can't wait untill we get to hear Yoyo's story and Beat's story. Anyway, as I have said before, I really do love this story and I hope you will update it soon.

I'm not surpised by the fact that Yoyo has a pet crow. Yoyo seems to relly love animals, so seeing that he takes care of one that got hurt like Vulture did. I love how Beat is so concerned about Yoyo (mostly becouse I really want Yoyo and Beat to get tother in this story). Well, I hope Rhyth and Garam don't get to badly hurt by the Terror Drone.

Aw, poor Beat I feel so bad for him. You know, in the game when Yoyo is missing Beat seems to be the one who had the most concerned about Yoyo. Since Beat is so concerned about Yoyo, does this mean that they will be a couple in the story? I hope so, I love BeatXYoyo so seeing that in this story would really make my day.

Poor Yoyo falling into the giant hole. Well, at lest Garam is there to help. So Garam is related to the Master? Wow, that's a new idea that I never herd before, I like it.

I'm happy to see that Corn and Gum got togther in this chapter, I think they are very cute togther. I'm glade to see that everything turnd out ok in the end for Gum (and Corn).

Rhyth was like a kid in a candy store when she got to 99th street. It was probably not a good idea to give Rhyth and Yoyo alcohol, I could just imagine all of the trouble they would get into while drunk. But, man was the ending of this chapter a big surpise. I hope everything will be ok for Gum in the end.

I'm glade to see that Rhyth has joined the gang. I actually loved Rokkaku-Dai Heights. I would always skate around the place and scare all the crows away. It looks like Gum is not going to have a good time over at 99th street. Man, Gum has some bad luck...

Aw, I love Potts he is so cute. Anyway, I think it was rather sweet of Corn to let Gum sleep with him that night. I really hope Corn and Gum get togther in this story.

Poor Gum, Beat could have been a bit nicer when he rejected her. Ah well, at lest Corn is there to make everything better (and to give her a kiss). I am glade to see that Yoyo and Potts did help Gum feel better, he may be a ahndfull but i think Yoyo would be a good friend.

So Gum is surrently trying to comfort someone who's mourning over the loss of someone they all held close... I wonder who that could be... Ah well, I will find out sooner or later. So Gum is friends with Mew? I kind of like that idea, I could always see the two of them being rather good friends.

It does not look like Beat is going to have alot of frends in the GG gang. I hope that will change soon, but with what happend I can't be sure if it will... Well, at lest Combo is part of the gang now.

Wow, I think I am going to like this story. I feel kind of bad for Gum, but I am happy to see that Yoyo helped bring some joy into the gang. I do have to wonder where Beat had gone off to for so long...