That was amazing.^^ It made me cry...Quite alot really and I was trying not to cry while reading fanfics for another week. Your a beautiful writer so you all get cookies.^^

Oma when i read the ending i started to cry im crying as im writing this too. That was an awesome story even though it made me cry. It's one of those stories that I will read over and over again. Its like these slashes that I read. I hate slashes but the ones i read i loved and i don't know why.
(Damn tears are raping my face they didn't even say surprise)
I like reading you stories beacause they are amazing and so is this one.

This was AWESOME. I haven't actually seen the dark knight yet [gets shot] but I WAN'T TO! So the only person I can compare Axel to now is Sweeney Todd...-sigh- but I will watch it! I have a new motivation to now!This story was sad at the same time though...poor Axel...all of the conflicting feelings. The horrible loss he felt...Great story!

WHOAH Jesus, this was scary. The intro worked really well and I was grinning because of it and I just couldn't stop. The joker-like personality really fits for Axel, and his teardrop-tattoos and the ever-lasting smile on his face only add to that.

But whoah, was that disturbing. Really, really disturbing. Very well done, and a good plot. But, just, whoah. That's all I can say.

My favourite part, though, was Roxas yelling at Axel that it wasn't Sora's fault. Something inside me broke at that :(

Awesome work!

I loved it, really, really, very truly.

that was really really good. i love that roxas got through to him. i always love these stories

Axel is teh krazeh =O but it is part of dear old axel

...OMG. Simply a-frikken-mazing! You are a god among us! The sheer idea of a joker-esque Axel... Simply put, I ** love you.!!

@_@

In my head, Axel kept switching between himself, and the Joker. XD;

Oh my, the Joker screwing Roxas...


o_o; IN A CAVE?!

WOW. I LOVE IT. And I'm only up to "I've got a little date with Number 13." I love the italics. Don't listen to what anyone says about them if they say something about it. The only problem is... now that I've seen The Dark Knight, I can hear Joker's voice in my head x'D
Oh... this is making me cry...
Yes... it was sexy... ** sexy... and ** sad. It made me feel schizo. I was crying,...but things down there didn't feel right... DAMN YOU DX
NO. No no, I think it's PERFECT. Don't over do it on the blood... It'd take away from the real purpose of the fic. It'd be like smut, but not smut... lol it'd be,... violent smut. And I don't think I'd like that to be in this fic. This was beautiful. Frighteningly beautiful. ** I love this story so much.

Wow...just...wow...I loved Axel before...Now he's just my ** hero...I've STILL got the shivers from that one...

Nervous? Oh no, no no no...

*Smiles wickedly.* I'm JUST like him...

Write a sequel. Now. And I mean now! You have to! There has to be more! Please please please? I loved the fic, it was very well writtena and was discriptive. I haven't seen the Dark Knight, but I kinda want to now... Awesome fic! Sequel. Go write now. -Shoos you off to go write-

Hah! I loved the dark knight and I loved this. Yes write a sequel! It'd make me happy. Great job.

That was great~ You're right, Axel makes a wonderful psycho. The ending was perfect too, and the entire thing was just... guh. AMAZING.
I'm glad that you didn't put anything too sexual in this chapter(?). I think it makes it a little sadder knowing that all Axel gets is a kiss (and a grope) and then he decides to let Roxas go. Of course, the fact that he's insane is sad too, but that's beside the point. :p
It makes me want to know what's going to happen next. Really, it's a great story on its own, but I wouldn't NOT like a sequel. :D
RUN, ROXAS, RUN - HE'S GONNA GETCHU. D8

It made me cry.
Poor Axel. Poor Roxas
I like it though. It's a really good story and you did a really good job depicting him as sorta being like the joker.
I really really liked it

Love,
Faye Silo

P.s.- Sequel? hells to the yes.