Wow.

WOW! So good! Love it. This finishes well, but a sequel from Xanxus' point of view or something would be great :)

Bel was so nice in this story Q_Q Poor Squalo...

quite a sad story, but i was hoping you would write a sequel.

I'm crying stupide girl ! Ah why have you write one story so sad ! And not even a happy ending ! You make me crying stupid girl Raah ! Well... that's beautiful...

I quite liked it, although at times, I didn't really know if Squalo was really squalo and such. [ooc? o-o]

I wish I could've seen a 'voii' or some stuff like that from Squalo. xD

But I loved this story, and I hope you can make a sequel.